"And listen to a solar orchestra
Performing a masterpiece
Of stellar bodies dancing through space
Traveling across a sea of constant light"
This is the stuff of a visionary. One who has the ability to fine-tune his spiritual eyeballs to "see" what others don't. Such colors flow from your pen. Here at lunch today, this poem was my desert.
I love your pure mind and spirit...which is transparent in this powerfully motivating expose of 'Dual Horizons'. Masterful!
Love, Rhonda
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
You have one of a kind vision...
Excellent poetry..
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Your sense of balance shows within this write. One can feel love while being aware of what can poision it. Love the way you went into the thought, and waved yourself back :-)
What is focused in on by the eye
Will describe the mood of the beholder
We can blink
And just that quickly
Change what we think
But what have we done
'Duel Horizon'
Looking at what's been swept under the rug
Made my heart tug.
DWB
Absolutely beautiful Jude and I especially like the last verse and sentence assuring us that the visions of origin remain untouched. I bow once more to your pen Master poet. Peace, blessings, and gratitude for caring and sharing. <Mikii>
Your startling and evocative poetry emanates from within you, as you capable of absorbing creativity and inspiration from both the interior and exterior aspects of life
vibrant images came into my mind as I read this...beautiful, beautiful imagery. and I love this thought:
It is the entire universe resonating
With the hum of love
And the motion of being alive
Your final lines are harsh, pitiful and true. Thank you for reminding us of the beauty that is so often hidden!
There is something very soothing about being by the sea, that primal presence who laps at our window. Waves of joy wash away the pools of sorrow and hey, you can see clearly again. Wordsworthian reflections from a golden eye. Jude the Seer! :-) k
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
Like the description of the vanishing point. We are all part of the whole unverse. The multitude of thoughts here has my mind on overload.
It is a beaut/ugly world. Expressed well in one poem..
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
I really needed to read this today...I found it very uplifting. I can relate and thank you. Panda :)
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
Of creative design is the clue to this poem and to you personally. A poem to chew on. Victor
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
Jude, you truly are made to write.Every line says you were born to create. This was one of my favs of yours.It was so gloriously beautiful.Thank you friend!!!
Like you, Jude, the ocean is the ancestral origin of life---inexhaustable and latent with potential, a metaphor of unfathomable wisdom with which the lead poet shares with Dual Horizon, transforming sea and man from calm to frenzy in a matter of minutes...you have the "inner equipment" to monitor your environment from sitting on the bleached skeleton of driftwood contemplating and seeking reassurance that science, philosophy, religion, and matters of the heart have some practical application in which you can meet the horizon with quill, ocean, sun, moon, and star...
The beautiful/ugly condition that is so prevalent in our vision today. I know we've always had the duality, but I think with all the peril , and our understanding that it is real,(finally) we have opened our third eye to capture a full view. I've started a poem on this but it's difficult...Splendid poem Jude!
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Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Such a vision you have molded here.
"And listen to a solar orchestra
Performing a masterpiece
Of stellar bodies dancing through space
Traveling across a sea of constant light"
This is the stuff of a visionary. One who has the ability to fine-tune his spiritual eyeballs to "see" what others don't. Such colors flow from your pen. Here at lunch today, this poem was my desert.
Gracias ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
I love your pure mind and spirit...which is transparent in this powerfully motivating expose of 'Dual Horizons'. Masterful!
Love, Rhonda
Excellent poetry..
Will describe the mood of the beholder
We can blink
And just that quickly
Change what we think
But what have we done
'Duel Horizon'
Looking at what's been swept under the rug
Made my heart tug.
DWB
So good to read your poetry again~~:)
Ty, you always appeal to the senses in the most extraordinary way.
;)Ch'erie
You have an awesome way of animating poetry.
Susan
Elizabeth
Micke
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Your startling and evocative poetry emanates from within you, as you capable of absorbing creativity and inspiration from both the interior and exterior aspects of life
Peter
I embrace life’s timeless winds
Arriving onto shores
Of creative design
love Tinka
It is the entire universe resonating
With the hum of love
And the motion of being alive
Your final lines are harsh, pitiful and true. Thank you for reminding us of the beauty that is so often hidden!
Susan
Fee
It is a beaut/ugly world. Expressed well in one poem..
Xxx dove
Sage
(ps: that fire is hot enough to cook without anymore blowing...;) e