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House of See-Through Mirrors
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My mind is a house of see-through mirrors

Each reflection I stare into
I see you standing beside me
Looking back and saying
“He looks so familiar but I can’t quite place who he is?”

And I too wonder who she is
Looking at me with a sense of trepidation
Or is that an expression of admiration?
For some reason I really can’t tell

Or are we emulating each other’s converse affiliations?
Or maybe we are unknowingly in sync
Like parallel universes?
Trying to merge our separate inner selves

My built in shrink
Suggests to me
It’s my female self

But I think it simply thoughts of you
 

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 Reviews of "House of See-Through Mirrors"
Reviewed by Dawn Mullan
Reviewed on November 17, 2006
Nice juxapositions about how we view ourselves, the paths we take, and how we affect other people. Even if they are all mere thoughts in our minds. Thank you, DL Mullan

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on November 14, 2006
Ah, Jude, and introspective beauty.... I love it.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Yes, I like the latter better.

Ron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 12, 2006
The power of reflection through a bounce-back of posture, gesture, facial expression, and life's costume. Few of us realize how much we depend on mirrors to "tune in" to analyze the mass of data on the eyes, flirting blinks, nosewrinkling squints and middle-finger flagging unwritten set of rules, mirror imaging---an age-old way of exchanging interior feelings to hold the self-conscious at bay, the white sclera of the eye reflects our feminine and masculine side, a sacred zone where we steal a glance where the thoughts of her originates...

Sage

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 11, 2006
Jude,

I will always love your inside-out writing style!

What's that???...that's funny...I hear Joni Mitchell singing...

"I've looked at clouds from both sides now, from up and down, and still somehow, it's clouds illusions I recall, I really don't know clouds at all."

You're the best!
Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2006
Some how this one got past me as far as reviewing goes. But now I am correcting that. Funny I have read this several times and honestly thought I had done a review. Love the thought wave in this one, as it explores possibilities ending with a delightful theory :-) Perhaps it could be both? ...........seeing and thinking of her through your female self :-)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on November 11, 2006
This is a beautiful write my friend, I thoughts of this wonderful muse were that of a lady friend whom may also be your kindred spirit. I believe that we each have a person whom we are destined to be with, and if we wait and listen carefully to our hearts, vision, or sometimes a dream, we will recognize and find the person whom we are destined to share our life and happiness with. Tremendous write...anxious to read more...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2006
Always so many levels to your writes Jude...as ever I am left contemplating...enjoyed much. Panda :)

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2006
Lovely

Reviewed by Rhonda Drogo (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
Awesome peceptions for me to read! I am very much enjoying your pen work here in the den. Your gifts are desirable, although, some comments confuse the purity. R.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
This sooooooooo appeals to me... everything about it, especially, perhaps, Janet's response!! Can relate, bein somewhat of a tomboy, personality wise. But I'm guessin, from the height/size ratios evident from your photographs, you'd have a hard time trying to squeeze into MY jeans at least, Suga! :)) The mind games and word play are divine: that cheeky "converse" and the metaphysical "trepidation": very suave. The whole mirrors-thing is fascinating... not just for the narcissism or the interrogational implications (like the two-way mirrors used by inquisitors, which sets up the trepidation-thing nicely)... but for the whole psychological reflection/shadowing investigation. Are there three of you??? If she/you is beside you, then who is looking into the mirror? That should make four, actually. I'm caught between the beside and infront. Lots of suggestion both of discovery and the fear of, perhaps. But to even begin with the premise that the "two" are perhaps alter egos is to suggest a certain degree of intimacy and comfort with each other to start with, which would discount the trepidation. My main reason for liking this is because it DOES make me realise that we look into mirrors, not to be satisfied, but instead to seek out and to ask questions, and then to find in them the answers. This is my kinda mad house... Right I'll dribble off now... the dentist bled anaesthetic down my throat today, too, which may account for why I have no poem readily on my lips tonight. It's good that I can be quiet, though, init?? :)) Klammed-up K xx

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
One Of Your Z Best Girl On Thoughts Of!

TRASK

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
I agree with you. It's a girl, not your inner girl either. What a lovely write tinged with mystery. Great piece. Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
Robert, you amaze each time I read you. I got out your poetry book again yesterday and am joyously reading it yet again.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
it is amazing how reflective mirrors can be

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on November 8, 2006
Excellent conceptual poem ... makes one think. Very well done, Robert.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
I asked her, and she said the look is definitely admiration and she too thinks of you.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
This describes an existential struggle...to live we assume us to take different forms (in our imagination), even while sleeping we assume. Taking a feminine form is suggestive of an androgynous soul. I like the image of "parallel universes".

D


S2(3) L3 "or it"--> "or is" (I think?)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
The see through looking glass makes mystery a better quest anytime. I admire the way your words give us a look at ourselves.
Susan

Reviewed by Jo Janoski
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Intriguing write!

Reviewed on November 7, 2006

"House of See-Through Mirrors"

Sublime!
I appreciate this write and its kaleidoscopic
pov alongside the suggestive overtones.

Great and take care,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Ace

Don't listen to the shrink...LOL
Listen to your built in computer, called your divine essence..

Peter

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
This is super as always...your mind is always on top of the game...enjoyed very much.

Allen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Fascinating, as is the concept of Parallel Universes, Robert.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Most inspiring offering Jude!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Jude,
This poetry opened my senses to our mirrored-self, within ourselves. The night before last the moon was full and it was casting it's brightness from the left...the porch light from the back...noticing, the shadows that were cast, my 4 yr old said, "Mommy...There are two of me, one in front and one on my right...then as he moved around he could make them come together...that's where his true excitement could be seen! Somehow, this poem reminded me of that special night!
Thank you Jude...
Great write! I can see you coming together! Smiles!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Very inspiring. Thanks, Holly

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
The mirror is endless in its admiration for those who look into it.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Excellent.
It's good to look in and find a friend,not so good to look in and find a stranger,(unless it's a welcoming kind stranger)hopefully we all can find harmony when we view our mirror within.
Best wishes always
from
Kay

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
interesting thoughts Jude and I think you are facing your own inner demons of love with an openess that few are willing to use. To question ourselves is to open ourselves to vunerability and that seems to be what you fear most here. Well done old friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
Mines full of those crazy mirrors you get at the fun fair...
WOW some finale, yeah women do that to us, make us see life from a whole new dimension, whether lovers or friends...

Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
A thoughtful poem.Iam wondering if it is to do with things depending itself on how we see it.

Bom Bhole!
Roshan

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
Intriguing. R

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
I like the simplicity and honesty of your questions set alongside the house of mirror imagery, which gave me a bit of a jolt as those fun houses seriously spook me. could really "see" the mirrored halves "trying to merge." for what it's worth, I find I see better when I descend into the depths of my heart, without the cold distractions of my many-mirrored thoughts. but I'm glad you stayed with the mind as it broadens the horizons a bit and brings up interesting possibilities. always appreciate how you shake it up, Jude, and manage to maintain some steady poetic imprint that is all your own no matter the content of your work. guess they call that voice... Dawn

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
Excellent poem, I like the idea of converse affiliations. The ending is perfect. Victor

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
I like what you say and how you say it. Beautiful conclusion!

Carmen :-0

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
This is a mind bender, Jude, but very articulate and I like how you play with the idea of contrasts and parallels.

Brett

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
Just thought I would stop by. I've been missing your poetry. These lines are a little too spooky because I dreamed about you last night: "My built in shrink Suggests to me It’s my female self, In the dream, you were a transexual. You made a beautiful woman, by the way.


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
Beautifully esoteric Jude, but I'm sure she will get the message;-)
Superb poem! ET

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
See through mirrors huh...? You had best return them to the manufacturer as they are defective...Ed

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2006
This one gives food to ponder I like this one...


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