if clarity would/could do it than maybe that's where my search should start.....but i sit and think of what color the sun gon be singing.....love your write!!!
A great write...to dream is to live. What if we had no dreams? We learn from the past so that the future may be happier, or at least that's the way it's supposed to be, but doesn't always work out that way. Great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Three things here are striking ...
Clarity
Hope
Action
Seems a great combination of things to make any endeavor successful Robert. This is a different slant for you, almost like motivational therapy. Great write.
there's that balanced perspective that always does me good to read. thanks, Jude, for continuing to present the whole picture and (much as I grumble about it sometimes) for making us all think with mind and spirit. Dawn
Nice work...your thoughts are a view of us as we follow the path of this journey through life...hope and action ot acting upon action ...all in the same as we seek to better or become ourselves at higher levels of life...very nice work and a very enjoyable piece....
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2006
"..Mountains would cease becoming obstacles..."
This line reminds me of the ancient Chinese proverb:
"It is not the mountain that wears you out. It is the grain of sand
in your shoe."
Thank you, Jude, for these great poems you post.
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2006
Deeply reflective, ...striking ...I could almost feel an ache as I read this...the hopeful close works so well. Panda :)
"perhaps..." might not be enough clarity, but it's a possibility!
One never knows, or maybe, can never understand the steps some others need to take for their own "...new day"...we therefore are left with our own dismay and clingings to hope, "Acting upon Action"
You got me thinking, as usual, Jude!
I enjoy reading your works!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2006
An excellent write, Robert!
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 29, 2006
Such a person is truly dead to the living world around him. We are meant to live the "now" and study the past as a reminder not to repeat old silly mistakes. Excellent as usual. Victor
When I read these type of writes
they remind me, when I am at a football game
And the offensive is in a huddle
I thnk they are talking about me
Am I paranoid Or What? .....lol
Peace be with you
William
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2006
OOOO. I love the iron heart, for personal reasons, can't mention the ex in public.
A little mix could serve him well...
Puts into perspective the meaning of one's existence. Those ones who enjoy high well-being are the ones with a devotion to some kind of purpose beyond themselves. Acting upon Action reminds us to bring our daily efforts into better alignment. Doing something original and worthwhile will let one end up on the side of the ledger where others will follow with new social ethics to motivate our society...a clear image of the broader man will bring upon a new day, Jude...
"Perhaps a little of both
Will bring upon a new day"
Robert, you've done it to me again. Hope by itself, will not bring anything about. It's like prayer without action. It goes into a hole of desperation.
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Thank you for sharing!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Blessings,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Thank you Robert.
Good write about acting on our fear.
Ron
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Another Your Z Best Yet...
TRASK
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
To be both Progressive and Realistic is the way forward I believe in life.
Thoughtful and deep poetry..
Peter
Surprizingly familiar. . . .
Written in the second person. . .
The 'He' could be. . . . .
DWB
Clarity
Hope
Action
Seems a great combination of things to make any endeavor successful Robert. This is a different slant for you, almost like motivational therapy. Great write.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
In artifacts of ancient lives"...splended writing Jude!
Carole
Love Tinka
This line reminds me of the ancient Chinese proverb:
"It is not the mountain that wears you out. It is the grain of sand
in your shoe."
Thank you, Jude, for these great poems you post.
One never knows, or maybe, can never understand the steps some others need to take for their own "...new day"...we therefore are left with our own dismay and clingings to hope, "Acting upon Action"
You got me thinking, as usual, Jude!
I enjoy reading your works!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
When I read these type of writes
they remind me, when I am at a football game
And the offensive is in a huddle
I thnk they are talking about me
Am I paranoid Or What? .....lol
Peace be with you
William
A little mix could serve him well...
Sage
Will bring upon a new day"
Robert, you've done it to me again. Hope by itself, will not bring anything about. It's like prayer without action. It goes into a hole of desperation.
Carmen :-)