Bathed in Oils (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

she bathe in oils
filled my room with scents
and my imagination ran
thanks was a nice roam for me

Reviewed on December 30, 2006

Flowing, caressing, beautiful poem.

Reviewed on December 30, 2006

This night she knew
Would be long and not taken
And flames inside her soul
Grew far too deep

...?? Has she got the hots for Robert Frost? :))

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on December 28, 2006

Awesome imagery. Makes me just want to get into a hot tub. This would be a great way to bring in the New Year.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on December 27, 2006

This is such a fine piece. Loved it.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

This poem wrapped its arms around me and soothed me to my core, Jude. Your images should be given in doses instead of Prozac. I am certain it would prove much more beneficial and just think how much nicer a place this world would be. Happy New Year to you!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

AH my Calgon bath this one had beautiful , relaxing, aura and visuals thank you..........:)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Sensually pleasing as the images you conjure of sexuality and passion hoping to be fulfilled arouse the mind.

Fee

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Very, very nice!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Reading this I feel pampered, while being caressed by the most luxorious mysterious essence,intoxicated by the overwhelming sensuality that permeates the atmopshere and thrills all the senses. A glorious experience!;-) Exquisite Jude!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

salted flesh and the "dark horizon" are interesting terms thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

And swooned on senses.

Ron

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

superb imagery Robert
Serene to the sense smooth as silk
excellent write
Peace be with you
Merry Christmas

William

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Great imagery! I love the whole mysterious scenario.

Brett

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

There is something diaphanous about this write Robert. Seemingly as impapable and intangible as air, but still somehow it clings to the senses as a fragrant dew. Tremendously penned Poet!

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

I pray that all may have this loving experience of being totally immersed in the gifts of the senses before they are awakened from this dream we call "Life".

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

lushous bath as she surrenders to this misty essence

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

I was floating as I was reading this...perfect flow of words Jude!!

Stunning write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by J.L. Day

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Gorgeous! I loved the imagery. NICE one, my friend! It leaves one hanging on, hoping for more, waiting for another installment....

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

This is beautifully done it brings many
images to mind. This carefully done piece has
good delicious desires of love and carries
special meaning-romance as she bathes in the oils of love
Excellent imagery and flow page is
dripping with romantic sensual feelings!
Love Peace & joy..Happy New Year!!!!
Morning Star

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Wow! This poem, along with dear Taylor's, awakens passions here in the Den this morning.
Merry Christmas.
Susan

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

I took a trip down memory lane as I read this poem...the images and the flow is beautiful!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Very beautiful annd mystical write...awakens one's senses...makes love come to life...also makes one want to go to the beach..to look for that mystical mermaid, or the love that they met on the beach long ago...enjoyed this much...fantastic write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

This dreamy poetic soliloquy -the flow of thoughts and images is mesmerizing and beautiful. Outstanding work!
~Butch

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

This poem is a smooth as liquid velvet, Jude...

~Carole

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

This is so very lovely Jude, beautiful poetry that just flows like a brook in the meadow,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

I liked the way everything 'flows,' in this one, Jude. It is
Mood Personified.

But I had to chuckle at Matlack's comment. What a card he is!

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on December 26, 2006

Very sweet. I can smell the fragrance :)
Happy holidays
love and peace

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on December 25, 2006

A very fragrant, soft advertisement for Calgon...where women of the future bathe in mood screens, pushing a button and choosing from earth, air, fire, water, and spirit mood-scented screen panoramas...oh, I'm there...

Sage

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on December 25, 2006

Etheral in its beauty. A welcome poem for after Christmas. Victor

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on December 25, 2006

Personally I like 10W30, its light, variable and can take the heat...Ed ;)

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on December 25, 2006

"She Bathed in Oils"

I have found an alluring beauty combined with a hint of sensual ambience woven throughout this work. Loved it~it feels tangible to me and much more, could go on and on....

Thank you,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by J.A. Terry

Reviewed on December 25, 2006

Not only is this very sensual and visually pleasing to the mind's eye, but this one touches all the senses as it's being absorbed. Another wonderful write...as usual!

Peace,
Jill