wow i don't think i can say anything that has not already been said here....some of the street art can make you wonder of and break your heart other images on buildings and trains streets and walls is quit raw and scary....you do it well here the imagery!!!
I too have sat back in wonder, about the graffiti artist, one who hides in the shadows of night, one who has no idea who his audience is, just passerbys...
They will be the eyes, for that second in time, that will know him through deciphering and understanding, his present objectives of what his soul portrays...depicting an "anatomy of temperamant",(right from the start, that is an awesome line!)
"...Where they lead, only the great artist knows
Envisioned only by the creator
Within the portrait of your shadow character"
Your ending ties us ALL right back to the beginning, as if, all along, it too followed me..."Shadow Character"...
So freakin' cool, Jude~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2007
This is a well written portrait bursting with images which connect the shadow charachter to his/her environment and emotions, as the future unfolds before him/her. -an excellent piece.
~Butch
As you open up your mind and pour out your soul in this eerily real write, I have to look within my own mind and seek out my own shadow characters after this. Jude you continue to amaze me with your origianality and intensity.
We are but the basic outline acting upon dreams and desires augmented by outside expectations and we work toward a divine goal, yet to be revealed -- we can only follow. You stopped me, cold.
Thank you for introducing this intriguing "shadow" character, Jude. This leaves me wondering and wanting to know "him" better. Thank you. Love and peace,
Wow very interesting thoughts in the subject of Shadow Character this great write living my mind to ponder
On my Owen shadow of my distinctive character.
love the rhyming in this profound poem, it works really well and sets an appealing tone especially for the tie in of the last stanza
Outstanding poetic thoughts!!
Love And Peace to You Always..Morning Star
SHADOW CHARACTER stands, paradoxically enough, like a sculpture molded out of penetrating psychospiritual insight and finely honed linguistic dexterity. Deeply moved by the way the external imagery tells a story of powerful inner truths. Gracias,
"... the winds howling
Through the boulevards of your dreams." - in addition to the mind-blowing, inimitable perspectives always present and shared in your psychological portrayals, it's images like this that keep this reader in permanent state of avidity concerning your poetry. More, please! :0)
Love,
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2007
Intriguing concept in your theme here ...I think this works superbly on a number of levels from physical to ethereal. Left contemplating. Panda :)
Wonderful write my friend, so much going on within this write. Shadows...I have felt as a shadow before in my time, lingering in the background, silent, being the follower...but there always came a time to come forward. I have also observed others who appear as shadows...silent and such but always observant of what's going on. A mystical feel to this write, enjoyed much.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Each day, it seems, is a universe unto itself. A moment in time to grab ahold of the stimulus that is given, to visualize something new, to offer the sacrifices of creation to those who care and understand the process.
I don't believe anyone knows where imagination will lead us. If they do, then they have become a product that is intended to be put on a shelf and ingested by the masses.
True creativity never knows where it is going, it just grabs tightly the reins and goes. You are such a man Robert.
Amazing character study, Jude. I love the style and temperament of this poem, the way this person grew in my mind in his individuality juxtaposed against his environment...and the possibilities and limitations.
This is one of my favorites, Jude,
Love,
Taylor
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They will be the eyes, for that second in time, that will know him through deciphering and understanding, his present objectives of what his soul portrays...depicting an "anatomy of temperamant",(right from the start, that is an awesome line!)
"...Where they lead, only the great artist knows
Envisioned only by the creator
Within the portrait of your shadow character"
Your ending ties us ALL right back to the beginning, as if, all along, it too followed me..."Shadow Character"...
So freakin' cool, Jude~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
~Butch
and a great artist you are.
Fee
Peace. Joyce
Carmen
Regis
Ron
Chrissy
On my Owen shadow of my distinctive character.
love the rhyming in this profound poem, it works really well and sets an appealing tone especially for the tie in of the last stanza
Outstanding poetic thoughts!!
Love And Peace to You Always..Morning Star
Aberjhani
Through the boulevards of your dreams." - in addition to the mind-blowing, inimitable perspectives always present and shared in your psychological portrayals, it's images like this that keep this reader in permanent state of avidity concerning your poetry. More, please! :0)
Love,
Alexandra*
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
I don't believe anyone knows where imagination will lead us. If they do, then they have become a product that is intended to be put on a shelf and ingested by the masses.
True creativity never knows where it is going, it just grabs tightly the reins and goes. You are such a man Robert.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Can shadows ever be faces in the crowd ? I believe even shadows can't hide forever. I love your use of words my friend.
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Very well done my friend!!
Love Tinka
This is one of my favorites, Jude,
Love,
Taylor
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