I like the message of hope you convey in this lovely piece. I think you are right: "...the time will come
When the soul of man will finally cope"
~Butch Howard
Great message. Once gave a talk on coping at a "Coping with the Future" conference in Birmingham as bad behavior. I'd take a coping saw and cut it out. ;-)
Ron
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
The power of positive thinking allows victory to those with whom take the chance. Great poem!
Wow Very well expresses and I think that many of us
Can relate to coping,
I agreed with John
Excellent poetic thoughts!
Love Peace and Joy..Many Hugssss to you...Morning Star
A captivating write with many emotions within the lines. Very well weritten, an offering that many can relate to. Coping...I think we have all been there! Great write my friend as always!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
...and that's why we have necks... in order to be able to look up and gain our proper perspectives! And walking blind sharpens our night vision, and then the stars REALLY come alive and oh, so close. You can hear them whispering.... This has all the wonder and anticipation of the New Heaven and The New Earth as we realise that we are part of the Growing Gem which is quietly preparing itself in the darkness, as we wade through our urban stratums of mud and grace. Having our sights on what's above and not below certainly gives our soul the scope to cope... And my favourite line of poetry of all time (so far!) "Ah, but a man's reach exceed his grasp or what's a heaven for"... Nice through-the-keyhole couplets, Jude. The view into the garden beyond speaks of Wonderland. LOL Great periscope / telescope write. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
You write reminds me of the time when all the searching for answers and bits of knowledge learned it all seemed as if it was just something to do while I was waiting for life to catch up with me. Lady J
Coping with the "search for an unchained hand".
I needed to read the first two lines several times until they took me to the answer: "the time will come".
The author isn't talking about what happened in life but also about the hope of what could be enfolding in the future.
Deep and masterly.
Georg
Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
I luv the positive energy I got from this wonderfully written poem ... hugs
Resonates like Pali scripture preserved on a palm leaf manuscript, "Abandoning violence to all living things...one should wander alone like a rhinocerous horn." Buddhist Revival...Monastery code of enlightenment, Jude...
Welcome!
The poems in this beautifully bound book are a result of over twenty years of observations. Observations of the world around us and on the telecommunications network. All of the hate, love, heroism, disasters, and those who help.
Beautif
When the soul of man will finally cope"
~Butch Howard
Ron
:)
I agree......and I like your rhyme!
Can relate to coping,
I agreed with John
Excellent poetic thoughts!
Love Peace and Joy..Many Hugssss to you...Morning Star
George
and a good write . . .
perhaps only the wanderings and mutterings of poets will accomplish what you seek
john+
Blessings,
Joyce B.
As Dorothy might have said to the Wizard:
"I surely hope that you're right!" Appreciative - Bill
and hopeful. A great poem!
Like being bathed in a sudden intense wash of light.
Stand strong!
Blessings ...
Richard
An excellent, deeply affecting, effective write; well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Geee I love this walk with you through the dark streets of your thoughts!!
Love Tinka
Wonderful pen from you Jude...wonderful.
love,
Susan
Fee
Sounds great. I hope I live to see that day. Beautiful and positive write my friend. Bless You Always, Paul.
I needed to read the first two lines several times until they took me to the answer: "the time will come".
The author isn't talking about what happened in life but also about the hope of what could be enfolding in the future.
Deep and masterly.
Georg
"Where positivity
Erases all our scars"
Hugs Angela
Sage
peace,
carolyn
Must say at times I miss the City
But too often
enjoyed your excellent write
Peace
William
Can see more stars and feel less heat
from the concrete.
Thanks for sharing, positively....