I never denied
The polarity of color and form
Stretching across deep hillsides
Or touching the fibers of my thoughts
Being in two places at once
Brings out the best in motion
Looking to the sky
Through branches and leaves
Observing strange hues of pomegranate
Or perhaps vermilion
In the cool teal of dusk
My soul lifts up and drifts to a distant shore
Strolling across sandy, sacred moments
Fated to reside in
The vaporous space of earth’s embrace
Here, beauty resembles towering trees
Swaying under clouds in special breezes
And around the ravine into the next valley
The magic of flowers grow without one single raindrop
Shedding leafy clothing for stellar garments
The variable of color permeates the landscape
And the collective chatter of consciousness
Is emboldened to listen to its momentum
I never felt I was any different
Yet I sensed I wasn’t the same
Surrounded by derision and dysphoria
The repercussions of my presence
Flows like lava across misty grass
Surrounding leaves I have grown to know
And the electric of concrete and decorated flesh
I developed in the orderly manner
Of a turbulent existence
Where everything seemed lucid and calm
And autumn is a phase of direction
And a prelude to the shade of dreams
Jude, I had to add this one to my library. Can't believe I almost missed it. The content on this poem was brilliant. I could feel the soul being touched in your words written.
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on September 10, 2007
This is a gorgeous "Prelude to Autumn's Dreams." The juxtaposition between human existence and the beautiful phases we see in nature create a poetic and literary tension that is unique and moving. You have once again, through well crafted words and images, captured something special here. Well done!
~Butch Howard
My favor season is autumn
I hate summers it's to hot
And autumn its in-between summer and winter
and the holidays And I love the holidays!
Beautiful vividness and tone your words
painted a beautiful picture!!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you.....Morning star
This is so visually delicious! I felt as though I was on a visual experience... Thank you, I really needed this today.
Peace, Love, and light,
Amber "V"
Very Blake-sian eternity-in-an-hour and whole-world-in-a-grain-of-sand -thing. I like the subtle shifting of the seasonal colours and forms, the transmutations and the ability, by being somewhat omnipresent, or at least in two places, to be able to travel the colour wheel with them, listening to their shifts of mood and textural meaning. I like the time-flow, too, like a pendulum swinging between its given points of chronos and place. The personal profile of the Voice moves along its own programme of metamorphosis with it. Very controlled, very precise - like the lucidity and calm you speak of in the penultimate stanza. Your last couplet is my favourite, intimating a duallism, that as the trees denude themselves, dreams will be revealed and gather flesh to their bones, providing sanctuary and ongoing refuge within the tensions of polarity of foliage and form. A most tranquil and meditative mood conjured here, allowing us to experience the rich density of the vibrancy of texture and palette. Yum! :)) landsKape Kate xx
Keen perception strong enough to hold ForÉse ground and lift up - Prelude to Autumn's Dreams - nude - "And autumn is a phase of direction And a prelude to the shade of dreams" - Man Dreamer covered by thick blankets of seaweed - trees stripped of leaves and bark, like you, Jude - enduring in the blueprint of skeletal design in ghost forests - Detritus - behind the battered beach...this poem makes no attempt to hasten the process by man-made means - it works out its own tempestuous evolution "out there"...shower of meteorites and indigo water, lose the blanket of seaweed...driftwood fantasies...
A wonderful write my friend, gives the reader a comfortable feeling when reading. A bit mysterious...with outstanding imagery! Well done! Enjoyed this much! Autumn is my favorite time of year!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Very beautiful Jude, how well you capture the wonders of the world around us blending both the reality of the flower with the mystery of dreams. Great stuff.
Jude, any painter who reads this would be foolish not to capture the beauty portrayed in this writing. The metaphors and similies are magnificent. This write reminds me of the many times I've sat among the beauty of mountains or a beautiful setting, and felt like I was two places at a time. Jude, this is a true winner.
So descriptive of the blissfulness of nature and the peace it can inspire. The line, "Here, beauty resembles towering trees" creates an image of a beautiful forest with the singsong whisper of wind in the trees.
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~Butch Howard
Brings out the best in motion"
And clearly creates a state of insightfulness that inspires some of the best from your pen. Superb poetry.
Aberjhani
I hate summers it's to hot
And autumn its in-between summer and winter
and the holidays And I love the holidays!
Beautiful vividness and tone your words
painted a beautiful picture!!
Love Peace and Hugssss to you.....Morning star
Peace, Love, and light,
Amber "V"
Love Tinka
Love Always,
Sage
Great poem! I know those dreams.
peace,
carolyn
Blessings,
Joyce B.
thanks,
Dan
Fee
And a prelude to the shade of dreams
I love autumn. I love your poem, particularly these two lines. Your words create a powerful mood. Thank you, Jude. Love and peace,
Regis
Ron
George
nice dream ....
enjoyed.....
Art Sun...
Georg
Strolling across sandy, sacred moments"
I've often felt like this but never put it into the proper words ...
The entire poem is splendid! It uplifts the spirit and nourishes the soul...Thank you!
ET
Be safe,
Karen