I enjoyed this poem very much. How true it is also, that anyone who is
willing to listen, can hear what is being said, even though no words
have been spoken. I know I will enjoy reading the rest of your works.
Thanks again for stopping by my site and commenting.

So many aspects of communication. From reading between the lines to hearing the words unsaid. Your poem shows the multifaceted world of learning how to listen.

I like the concentration of meaning in few, effective lines.

Greetings,

Axilea

Cool renderings...

Ron

Hey Jude,
NICE...
Couldn'ta said it beta My Self My Friend.

Love'n'Light
Gypsy.xxx


Blessed Be ! ! !

Two souls/hearts so intertwined - few words are needed to communicate LOVE.

Kathy

..."I am nowhere without you"... and everywhere within... yes, I see. And thus there is nowhere where the two are not together. The closeness between these souls and psyches is breathtaking... the almost fevered animation of the one, so alert and all antennae searching, reading, transducing... and the one who is necessarily inert and yet sourcing all the energy, perhaps. I had meant to say on Lace and Lavender that it reminded me somewhat of the Pitt Jolie film, Mr and Mrs Smith, about the marriage of two undercover agents. This has that same tension within the relationship, somehow; potentially dangerous, given the passivity in order to "protect both our interests". Anyways, that's my more dramatic interpretation. Otherwise it is beautiful, amorphous and sinuous romance that, although not in itself a fantasy, has fantasy as part of its intrinsic life-blood somehow. And certainly a case of "where less is more", developping mutual understanding through the building of the intuitive and psychic muscle. Sweet poetry, Jude! Love, Kate xx

The mystic teacher here - Karmic Coma - teaches us how to ascend the spiritual ladder of quietude. This mediates the need for cooperative effort to grow and live with our dualities. Observant of vibrational energy. The alteration in consciousness is necessary for a state of being to be defined. Cathartic hypnotherapy.

Love,
Sage

An extremely lucky woman indeed, Jude.

Annie

nice delivery

Jude, this is sensual and alluring to my eye...this reader could not turn away...it's beautiful in many ways and says so much with few words...profound & well written.

Very thought-provoking work, Jude. The message has a mystical and sensual quality. I like it.

I've melted, lost in your words.

an intoxicating write that coaxes spirit from slumber and embraces mystery, Jude. murmur some more about this... Dawn

"Self-induced (karmic) coma"... here's a mind-blowing concept, dear Jude... and one that won't leave me alone for a while. This is positively brilliant!
Love & {{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}
Alexandra*

the title is mind-blowing, poem is also good and meaningful.

My , so gentle, and very responsive to each others heart.
Christine

Very nice, Jude...you have a depth that whether within wisdom, philosophy, romance, love...

SHINES!!!

I applaud you sir...

Art Sun...

love this-there is so much truth in your opening lines and all is summed up beautifully at the end

Excellent Jude, blessings, Holly

Breath taking dear man..Hugssss

This is so sweet, Jude! What lucky woman. I hope she knows how special you are. I'm sure she does. ~ Sara

What a marvlous way to say...I love you.

Fee

Friend, I hope you don't wake ever from that type of coma.
Georg

Your type of coma doesn't sound too bad at all.

Fewer words most times have a greater impact. Very well written.

George

There is a lot of soul energies and empathy in this one. Wonderful write, Robert!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Great write, Jude; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Beautiful description of how a woman and a man attempt to communicate, through our innate differences..... on our way to striking a
personal balance of the Feminine and Masculine within ourselves.
Great stuff Jude!
:-D

Jude,

Exceptional poetry, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I love the subtle rhyme and the esoteric word play, you manage to make everything you write have a sensual bent to it, wordmaster!;-)great romantic finale...



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