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one-two
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one

i’ve been around for a relatively long time-
the cool mist launches off waves
onto my cantankerous form
looking toward the horizon for a sign,
for a vessel to depart upon
but I will have to wait a bit longer,
my craft necessitates remaining onshore



two


we buried Chee-Wee in a decorated tin box,
silly little love bird that loved to sing
as the sun first showed its ancient face
until the moon howled through the night air

we buried her under a willow tree, alongside the beach
where waves still remind us of her delicate song,
the wind her flight and the sky her color

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 Reviews of "one-two"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
good one

Reviewed by deleted deleted (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
aw, have fun in a higher dimension, little love bird.

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on August 27, 2008
Grand piece.
Condolances extended in sincereity

Rod

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 25, 2008
Friends come in all forms, even wearing feathers, that leave us with memories of sweet pleasures.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
your writing is very touching--i am sorry for the loss of your pet--those things are so hard on our souls

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
Beautiful and touching write, Jude. It really shows you are a generous and loving spirit. I am sure, Chee-Wee appreciated singing for you and yours. ~ Sara

Reviewed on August 24, 2008
Such a lovely tribute to your little Chee-Wee. Now she sings her delicate songs for the angels. Listen carefully and sometime you may hear her singing again to you. You really touched my heart Jude.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
Colorful imagery,written with warmth and empathic insight! Beautifully expressed!...ET

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
A sweet good bye to your sweet Chee-Wee. You will hear her song in memory and in your verse. Eileen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
A sad write, but well written indeed, wonderful imagery that allowed the reader to experience a small part of the joy you knew...
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
They live long, we relish their color and song, and then, like all creatures, they are gone.

Ron

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
Thank you for sharing although as Fee said a sadness yet a sign of love for all.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
Pure and sweet, this poem seeps a sense of sadness yet an understanding too that all things must end and if done with dignity death can be bearable to survivors...
Fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
Glad your hanging around to continue this your craft & as for Chee-Wee with the ocean near never will you forget her song I'm sure...ed

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
I cannot leave on a boat either on the waves, no money to do that. Sorry about your little pet. I hate when they die and leave us. So sorry my sympathy to you.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 24, 2008
Both beautiful and heartbreaking, you take the reader from a place of anticipation to a place of finality. Chee-Wee has boarded the craft, there will be a familiar song whispering on the wind as you prepare for your grand entrance.
Take care,
Sherry


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