Perhaps an alter-ego, Through The Looking Glass kinda Wonderland write. The Voice here seems to be sharing something of the same clear "mirror" as the one in Shattered Intentions, the singer perhaps the (self) reflexive "you/your", lullabying approval, spiritual heat keeping tortuous thoughts at bay...
Sorry... just seem to have got into this comparative and relational methodology and can't get out of it! It'll pass... or maybe not, as long as wings need two to fly!! :)) xx
'sumptuously alive' - what a great way to be amongst all the other images in the poem. Did you want 'realizing your(e?) there' - 'loquacious lullabies' - lovely, softer than babbling brooks - great melt and freeze poem Jude, reminds me of Aguas de Marco, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRqI5R6L7ow - yum! melts...xx
Hey Jude, I like "noise of light" and "loquacious lullabies." This poem gave me thoughts that Conversation or human voices are like a river. I see a river.
Jude this is my favorite of yours, to be able to be with one or in a place that is non existent is truly a miracle... though we are awakened by the freeze of the river's voice. Outstanding write!
This has a feel of living in a comatose state of existence, a deep depression where your body wants to live but your mind wants to sleep in a cocoon of safety. Wonderfully written..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
There truly are those who live within the realm of frozen thoughts and emotions. For some reason, we wish to believe that we can melt the frigid atmosphere that surrounds them. We hang on the moment when they emerge into the warmth of human kindness, only to watch them slip away from us, yet again, back into their icy world. Unfortunately, love cannot heal the heart and soul of a non-believer. Wonderful, wonderful poetry, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry
"...wither ghost..." "...tremulous..." "...singing lullabies..." the peaceful platitude of someone that are offering a site in front the fireplace, where, from thoughts burning logs we can hear the noise of light...
Stupendous! ! !
From a dream like state back into the realities in such a smooth transition only to return once again when the time is right, so movingly beautiful.....
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Sorry... just seem to have got into this comparative and relational methodology and can't get out of it! It'll pass... or maybe not, as long as wings need two to fly!! :)) xx
Regis
that dance in our dreams, along with the lyrical voices
A beautifully painted canvas...
Ron
Your poetic voice speaks loud & clear here . . . another masterpiece!
Lance
Thanks for your interesting and flowing poem.
Kathy
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Fee
Take care,
Sherry
Stupendous! ! !
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
Elizabeth