thoughts and images pass through synaptic portals
formed in a stream of experience
encouraged by emotion, attitude, character, and ability
pouring out thoughts, trying not to exaggerate
personal interests and desires: rather zen-propelled transformations
of existential concepts possessing lives of their own
only then, capturing a gush of muse
seizing the motivation to build a poem
from the debris of contemplative deliberation
i never seek to control poetry, rather liberate its boundaries
like a vehicle to be steered and accelerated
by fueling its direction toward unforeseen destinations, never braking
an avenue of poetic engineering
proposing a daring blueprint
designed by automatic endeavor preconceived in structure and content
surmounting its edifice, impromptu-growing and expanding,
looking glass scenery toward dreams of endeavor
always in progress and yes, evolving
Great construction and rhythm to express
an open-ended creation.
Axilea
"I never seek to control poetry, rather liberate its boundaries
like a vehicle to be steered and accelerated
by fueling its direction toward unforeseen destinations, never braking."
Jude, what a write my friend....you never cease to amaze us all with your poetic creativity....keep them coming....another gem of a write from you....Love n luck...BHUWAN!!!
A poem evolves on its own
You as the poet must steer its direction and development
Never controlling but guiding another words
A poet does not control rater set the poem free
This is a very helpful write
Excellent thought brilliant write…
Sending you Peace Love and Light…and..Hugssss..Yolie
Edwin
It's the way you engineer words such as "capturing a gush of muse" that always puts me into deep contemplative thought whenever I read one of your poems. You inspire me to higher heights with my own writing and I thank you for that and for giving us so much of yourself with everything you write.
*hugs*
Marcia
Good one Jude
thanks hehe
Ch'erie
Ron
when I need to be reminded to "liberate" my poetry "by
fueling its direction toward unforeseen destinations."
-gene.
well brother ... I can tell you that the pile that I've accumulated lately has overtaken the neighborhood.
These are intelligent and sensitive insights into the process Jude, and also the role of those chosen to keep alive an increasingly misunderstood art form.
Blessings ...
In Spirit,
Bear
That's it, great pen, 'never seeking to control
poetry but to liberate its boundaries'
Exactly, my friend and you always do...
Georg
by fueling its direction toward unforeseen destinations, never braking"
how "capturing a gush of muse"seizing the motivation to build a poem your ever-evolving mind that shows us how you use your "avenue of poetic engineering" "always in progress" this is outstanding,and a gift for us to learn from...Thanx;-)...ET
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
different views and meanings.
But in the end it is the writer's duty,
to make it easy for the reader to understand.
Some will maybe say it's not a poem
If the reader understands it's just the same.
For me, what counts is the inner flame
Love Emile
Take care,
Sherry