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American Tragedy (5-7-5)
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     there’s a giant hole

     in the American heart

     Ground Zero’s undone

 

  

 


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Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 10, 2009
yep, seems like it... at least, last time I looked just a few weeks' ago it was, though I thought work was still going on at the site in some shape or form. But, more than that, this is provocative: whenever national tragedy strikes, such solidarity of "national" heart and soul ensues for a while... only to dribble out through the socks pretty smartish just as soon as politics, religion and mammon reassert themselves... Perhaps in this grave instance, they have yet again managed to Filch The Zilch. Poignant, Kartero. Spoken from the heart of the City's scars.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on May 10, 2009
you always manage to nail it, jude.
ever worth the read, poet.
carolyn

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 8, 2009
Love it! That you can encompass such a great tragedy in so few words is an incredible talent! Good job.

Reviewed on May 7, 2009
It's powerful Jude, like a punch to the heart.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Powerful words that brings out such feelings.Take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
You've stuffed a whole lifetime of tragedy into a small powerhouse of a write.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
res ipsa loquitor! -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
A great job with this poem, Jude. America seems to be a bit lost emotionally right now. You capture that well. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
Exceptional Ku! A hole that can never be filled!...ET

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
You should have been one of the Marines in my troop, with a green light to go after 9/11.
They can put anything there, it will, no matter what, Ground Zero to many.
Great ku.

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Such power, Jude, in so few words...even long after they've been read.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
poignant!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Oh how I know. Though we have contributed much I can't help but think that perhaps God is sending us a message to leave it alone in honor of all who were killed and injured that fateful day. We have been there a few times as so many we know were involved, yet it still takes my breath away and the enormity of it all. How well I remember taking the train in as a kid just to watch in awe as the towers were being built only years later to watch them fall......

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Jude,
Pithy, focused, right on the money.
John

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
That's about it in a nutshell. How things have changed since the trauma. Will that giant hole ever be filled in the psyche? Don't think so. Intense ku that leaves a lingering sadness. Well done...Lin

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Undone me with this one.

Ron

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
On target, Jude, though sometimes I think there's also
a large hole in the American head. -gene.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
You have packed a whole lot of power into so few words, Jude. Your words play out in so many ways. Though there is still sadness, there is a lot of apathy, as well. Because we have not been attacked since 9-11 many have gone back to believing that we are untouchable. Complacency truly is the enemy of freedom.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
You hit the nail on the head..simply sad!

Reviewed by deleted deleted (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Perfection, Jude. How are you these days?

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MaYh-KN94Ko

not much more one can say - thought I'd share this video

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Karma. Just leaving Ground Zero to rot, amongst other atrocities is why the earth has a hole in its own heart. The money we could have used for good was stolen like a thief in the night! Now we are all feeling the wrath of it. And the Devil is the only one happy.








Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Strong work in such an intense format...no that is one hole that will bleed for a long long time.

Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Some "holes" such as the ones in our soul can never be filled again and the ache never goes away. Succinctly powerful, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Everyone has a connection to this, for myself, it was a wake up call, and I feel that people are still asleep and need to realize just how deeply this hole is.
Very huge message in a few words.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on May 4, 2009
The tragic thing is, Jude, is we've gone back to a pre-9/11 mentality - some need no reminding of the hole in our hearts. Well said.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Quite profound, and that hole will never go away.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
My wifes spirit is still strong at Ground Zero...I rarely get there, as I get physically sick when I visit NYC anymore, but you are right, there is a hole there that can never be filled...Ed

Reviewed by Joy Marsh
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Hits home for me. I do not think it will ever heal for me. A complex and emotional write with just a few well written words.
Joy


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