hey Jude! -- no that's the wrong era is it not? -- humorous, and perhaps filled with more innuendo than one initially suspects -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Original and different, I love the beat and the meaning behind the words, Jude. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

"DEEP" It is
how deep can you go
Excellent write Jude
Peace be with you
Don't slip

William

Now this is different and I like it very much Jude. Light hearted yet profound. Good to experiment sometimes isn't it?

Very nice poem,I enjoy it,take care

EDWIN

Love the vernacular! Still have bone-cracking dreams....



Ron

P.S. If you are a Choir Practor, I'll sing along. ;-)

enjoyed the read

... glad to see something's tickled your funny bone, Kartero! Hope this ain't that spooky old undertaker talkin!? :)) Maybe you is offerin some good ol Judean head massage here. Think you'd get on well with the Wigmen of Papua New Guinea (a follow-on link to the Dance vid). Their seamless arse-grass looks truly liberating! Good to see you well-oiled and poetically limber as always, Senor. Deep adjustment is the extra-terrestrial journey of lucid-dreamland for certain sure. xx

The jargon makes this unique poem a real treat,
with a message too... ET

Jude,
Whimsical, witty, urbane. Great stuff!
John

love that last stanza... great piece!

Jude,
I love this light hearted poem. Such a joy to read today.
When I get my massages, I feel like I am being deeply adjusted. In my dreams however as your poem says, I will be careful not to break my spine...great poetry as always,
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

...thanks for the smiles this morning Jude, it goes well with coffee

Carole~

...JUMP IN AND SINK, SWIM OR DIE!! A WELL WRITTEN MOTIVATOR...ENJOYED AND THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

very nice advice!

My daughter just graduated from a massage school. Going in deep is necessary ... but it can be really uncomfortable. Very nicely done, Jude.

As always, when I sleep, one eye keeps on being open and my back against the wall, don't call it paranoia, call it staying alive!
But then...your adjustments ain't coming with clear instructions, just with a report of someone that felt from one of his dreams and hurt his spine! LOL

Georg

You have plumbed the depths of our dream like state.

Playful poetry.

Great wordplay, I mean,..... truly engaging, again Jude,
Jasmin Horst

The Chiropractor's creedo? Lots of fun, Jude, enjoyed the inuendo.
Take care,
Sherry

Profound and stirring yet cryptic. The intellect vs the soul excellent match. You can't loose. The nascient primal thought is about to emerge. Odes to Jude ForEse
Cheers
Alain

I just love sexual fetishes! The Captain's Daughter aka cat 'o nine tails thrashing livid wet dreams with leather fibers embedded in the assay of the alchemical whip! Vitriol of Venus out on an astral limb, Eye of Horus is watching the deep adjustment...Chiropractical re-alignment of the synapses, Jude! Tongue tied...

Sage

LOL...love this, very creative