Your style of writing Jude, "IS" Special!
leaving me wondering...
assuming... and plain SMILING!
This is another exquisite piece, you crafted!
WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and WARM Hugs, Purple_PassionS_Pulsing, SHEExooo
P.S. Seeing your pict/Bio, you remind me of Sam Elliott and that's a compliment... If you have HIS DEEP SExy deep haunting Voice, Women need to watch out...and that coyly sly grin...If you don't know who his is, google him....Played in a lot of Westerns/etc. and with Patrick Swayze in RoundHOuSE, I think it's called.
the opaque forms, apparitions sunlight and prism in concert release to tease the senses and rob our sensibilities, or is truth we would not otherwise be privileged to see without the gift of the stain glass -- a marvelous perspective to share with others Jude -- peace and love my friend --Jon Michael
This piece takes me to places I've not only seen but experienced in sudden flashes of understanding. ...light, fractals, merging, patterning inward...exquisite.
Your writing does something that few accomplish. It leaves the reader thinking long after it's read. Metaphysical....philosophical....spiritual...it's all here.
I really enjoyed the transcedent qualities of this poem.
St. Paul said, "Now we see but a poor reflection as in a mirror; then we shall see face to face. Now I know in part; then I shall know fully, even as I am fully known."
Your poem is truly inspirational, thanks for sharing
Cheers
Alain
Vapor leaving DNA of intelligence, indigos scoping out earthling candidates for a new world beyond, the "watcher" infiltrates human society, camouflaging in with the populus...those who walk amongst us...a glimpse of a voyeuristic prism reflecting earth's solar rays, scanning those who make the crystal cut...transmissions beamed up by lasers...sci-fi or reality?
I like the way this poem can have multiple meanings. It can be about a person, or a glimpse into God. Or it can just be about ourselves. Great poetry, as always. ~ Sara
... blimey... i can feel myself getting all complex about this one. Frustrating: these thoughts come in a flash and yet take too long to seek to articulate, but i can't resist...
"glimpse" and "grasp" are an immediate pairing in my mind. Maybe it is just the alliteration of the titles, but, more than that, both play with ideas of "catching something", physically, intuitively or by congnitive understanding. These lines, i think, "grasp" much of what this poem is about and both poems contain religious imagery/iconography suggestive of spirituality, faith, destiny:
interlacing destinies are created by allowing
collective moments to share universal selves:
In this poem, the stained glass window is a collective, as is the composite silhouette. Perhaps both are pictures of our "universal selves". Both are light-dependent (understanding, illumination). At times, we are both vibrant compositions of light; at others, in-filled silhouette. Here, they connect and exchange. We move around the spectrum from one to the other in much the same way as the action of cog-wheels, interaction and interlocking friction forcing the wheel around. In this way i see that both the beautiful, light-conducting window and the collaged silhouette are co-dependent, part of the whole, shifting round this spectrum-wheel of light and dark, always together but non-merged, if you like! :)) I'm intrigued by your use of silhouette instead of shadow, which, of course, to be positioned in front of the window in a supposed building, is correct: This is another suggestion of the face-to-face engagement between the two, rather than an unobserved presence behind. And, as the "cogs" interlace and connect, their mutual spectrum moves round... moving the dark out of view...
so many thoughts and too many words on a poem that is a combined little gem of metaphysical thought and philosophical proposition. Gets the grey matter going quicker than my two mugs of Earl Grey this morning, thank you, Kartero! :)) xx KaleidosKope Kate xx
Jude,
Very mystically written. I feel a sense of secrecy and spirituality in this poem. Like the glimpse of forbidden knowledge is just within your minds eye, but it vanishes just before you are truly united with this thought or sight. a very deeply written poem, and one of intrigue and adventure.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
These first two stanzas are a real masterwork. They get right into the mind as the reader swaps the image of the stained glass and the silhouette which you drew for us amazingly well. Loved this.
Jude,
A dance of light, shadow and thought with enigma and that moment that tantalises...that moment.
John
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
interesting thoughts here jude. your last stanza really jumps out at me. don't lose your individuality; don't become a rare and precious flower only to change colors to whatever the going trend may be. don't blend into the background and disappear. great stuff, once again.
My grandmother wrote a poem called by the same name.
She was 'country'. Her sister-in-law was Pasty Montana.
Hers was about seeing a glimpse of herself through the stages of life.
Youth - Teenager - Adult - Old - and then on the verge, knowing there's nothing left to do - but . . . .
. . . . . .I gathered yours much the same but in 'a variable form'.
This lovely poem reminds me of times I've sat in church and stared at the stained glass window behind the chancel and watched the play of light through the colorful glass. Your poem adds another dimension with the illusion of someone's image in shadow form materializing--perhaps even Christ--depending upon what is in one's thoughts.
This brought with it such a stunning image of the form and shape of someone in a chappel looking out but also someone outside looking in. then thoughts start drifting to life as it pertains to this write and really blew me away with the patterns that came out of it.
This leaves me in that place where I would be wondering if I really saw what I knew I felt, or if it was just the imaginings of a woman who came from over the edge. The spiritual forms are the hardest to accept as present and the easiest to cause me to wonder. This is a well woven tapestry of color, gut knowledge and emotion, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
leaving me wondering...
assuming... and plain SMILING!
This is another exquisite piece, you crafted!
WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and WARM Hugs, Purple_PassionS_Pulsing, SHEExooo
P.S. Seeing your pict/Bio, you remind me of Sam Elliott and that's a compliment... If you have HIS DEEP SExy deep haunting Voice, Women need to watch out...and that coyly sly grin...If you don't know who his is, google him....Played in a lot of Westerns/etc. and with Patrick Swayze in RoundHOuSE, I think it's called.
Bobbi
Ron
St. Paul said, "Now we see but a poor reflection as in a mirror; then we shall see face to face. Now I know in part; then I shall know fully, even as I am fully known."
Your poem is truly inspirational, thanks for sharing
Cheers
Alain
Sage
lifeform's creative puzzle ever beguiles..
always a sublime pleasure, jude.
be well,
carolyn
"glimpse" and "grasp" are an immediate pairing in my mind. Maybe it is just the alliteration of the titles, but, more than that, both play with ideas of "catching something", physically, intuitively or by congnitive understanding. These lines, i think, "grasp" much of what this poem is about and both poems contain religious imagery/iconography suggestive of spirituality, faith, destiny:
interlacing destinies are created by allowing
collective moments to share universal selves:
In this poem, the stained glass window is a collective, as is the composite silhouette. Perhaps both are pictures of our "universal selves". Both are light-dependent (understanding, illumination). At times, we are both vibrant compositions of light; at others, in-filled silhouette. Here, they connect and exchange. We move around the spectrum from one to the other in much the same way as the action of cog-wheels, interaction and interlocking friction forcing the wheel around. In this way i see that both the beautiful, light-conducting window and the collaged silhouette are co-dependent, part of the whole, shifting round this spectrum-wheel of light and dark, always together but non-merged, if you like! :)) I'm intrigued by your use of silhouette instead of shadow, which, of course, to be positioned in front of the window in a supposed building, is correct: This is another suggestion of the face-to-face engagement between the two, rather than an unobserved presence behind. And, as the "cogs" interlace and connect, their mutual spectrum moves round... moving the dark out of view...
so many thoughts and too many words on a poem that is a combined little gem of metaphysical thought and philosophical proposition. Gets the grey matter going quicker than my two mugs of Earl Grey this morning, thank you, Kartero! :)) xx KaleidosKope Kate xx
Very mystically written. I feel a sense of secrecy and spirituality in this poem. Like the glimpse of forbidden knowledge is just within your minds eye, but it vanishes just before you are truly united with this thought or sight. a very deeply written poem, and one of intrigue and adventure.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
A dance of light, shadow and thought with enigma and that moment that tantalises...that moment.
John
Blessings and Love - Micke
Regis
She was 'country'. Her sister-in-law was Pasty Montana.
Hers was about seeing a glimpse of herself through the stages of life.
Youth - Teenager - Adult - Old - and then on the verge, knowing there's nothing left to do - but . . . .
. . . . . .I gathered yours much the same but in 'a variable form'.
5 star write my poet friend.
Cheers,
Dan
Great write!
Georg
fee
Take care,
Sherry