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glimpse
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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a silhouette materializes

in front of a stain glass window

 

it is a variable form, a shady figure,

an outline of matter  

filling in the transparency of blending color

 

the skin of its creative puzzle

is formed by fractals of patterned light –

 

you understand, it’s acceptable to be noticed

in the background,

as long as you don’t merge

into an unstable spectrum,

disappearing from my entire view

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "glimpse"
Reviewed on August 18, 2009
Your style of writing Jude, "IS" Special!
leaving me wondering...
assuming... and plain SMILING!
This is another exquisite piece, you crafted!

WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and WARM Hugs, Purple_PassionS_Pulsing, SHEExooo

P.S. Seeing your pict/Bio, you remind me of Sam Elliott and that's a compliment... If you have HIS DEEP SExy deep haunting Voice, Women need to watch out...and that coyly sly grin...If you don't know who his is, google him....Played in a lot of Westerns/etc. and with Patrick Swayze in RoundHOuSE, I think it's called.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
the opaque forms, apparitions sunlight and prism in concert release to tease the senses and rob our sensibilities, or is truth we would not otherwise be privileged to see without the gift of the stain glass -- a marvelous perspective to share with others Jude -- peace and love my friend --Jon Michael

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Reflections and shadows can merge together thru facets of colour and imagery....M

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
This is so beautiful. It will remain with me for a long time.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
I can read you clearly now, through the shadowy stain glass.

Ron

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
This piece takes me to places I've not only seen but experienced in sudden flashes of understanding. ...light, fractals, merging, patterning inward...exquisite.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Your writing does something that few accomplish. It leaves the reader thinking long after it's read. Metaphysical....philosophical....spiritual...it's all here.

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
I really enjoyed the transcedent qualities of this poem.
St. Paul said, "Now we see but a poor reflection as in a mirror; then we shall see face to face. Now I know in part; then I shall know fully, even as I am fully known."
Your poem is truly inspirational, thanks for sharing
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
Vapor leaving DNA of intelligence, indigos scoping out earthling candidates for a new world beyond, the "watcher" infiltrates human society, camouflaging in with the populus...those who walk amongst us...a glimpse of a voyeuristic prism reflecting earth's solar rays, scanning those who make the crystal cut...transmissions beamed up by lasers...sci-fi or reality?

Sage

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
I like the way this poem can have multiple meanings. It can be about a person, or a glimpse into God. Or it can just be about ourselves. Great poetry, as always. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
...reflections stir emotions...great write Jude!!!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 8, 2009
to be in the world, but not of it...
lifeform's creative puzzle ever beguiles..
always a sublime pleasure, jude.
be well,
carolyn

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
... blimey... i can feel myself getting all complex about this one. Frustrating: these thoughts come in a flash and yet take too long to seek to articulate, but i can't resist...

"glimpse" and "grasp" are an immediate pairing in my mind. Maybe it is just the alliteration of the titles, but, more than that, both play with ideas of "catching something", physically, intuitively or by congnitive understanding. These lines, i think, "grasp" much of what this poem is about and both poems contain religious imagery/iconography suggestive of spirituality, faith, destiny:

interlacing destinies are created by allowing
collective moments to share universal selves:

In this poem, the stained glass window is a collective, as is the composite silhouette. Perhaps both are pictures of our "universal selves". Both are light-dependent (understanding, illumination). At times, we are both vibrant compositions of light; at others, in-filled silhouette. Here, they connect and exchange. We move around the spectrum from one to the other in much the same way as the action of cog-wheels, interaction and interlocking friction forcing the wheel around. In this way i see that both the beautiful, light-conducting window and the collaged silhouette are co-dependent, part of the whole, shifting round this spectrum-wheel of light and dark, always together but non-merged, if you like! :)) I'm intrigued by your use of silhouette instead of shadow, which, of course, to be positioned in front of the window in a supposed building, is correct: This is another suggestion of the face-to-face engagement between the two, rather than an unobserved presence behind. And, as the "cogs" interlace and connect, their mutual spectrum moves round... moving the dark out of view...

so many thoughts and too many words on a poem that is a combined little gem of metaphysical thought and philosophical proposition. Gets the grey matter going quicker than my two mugs of Earl Grey this morning, thank you, Kartero! :)) xx KaleidosKope Kate xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Jude,
Very mystically written. I feel a sense of secrecy and spirituality in this poem. Like the glimpse of forbidden knowledge is just within your minds eye, but it vanishes just before you are truly united with this thought or sight. a very deeply written poem, and one of intrigue and adventure.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
These first two stanzas are a real masterwork. They get right into the mind as the reader swaps the image of the stained glass and the silhouette which you drew for us amazingly well. Loved this.

Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Sorry Jude, too late, I hope you can read this, it might be in need of some adjustment, you are brilliant my friend. Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on August 7, 2009
great glimpse Robert, reminds me of the vampire, which would miss his entire view

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Jude,
A dance of light, shadow and thought with enigma and that moment that tantalises...that moment.

John

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
interesting thoughts here jude. your last stanza really jumps out at me. don't lose your individuality; don't become a rare and precious flower only to change colors to whatever the going trend may be. don't blend into the background and disappear. great stuff, once again.

Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Quite tantilizing the view, Jude! I so enjoy your imaginative poetry!!
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Nicely penned, Jude.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Your words truly give me pause for reflection, Jude. Thank you for sharing your creative and intellectual gifts. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
My grandmother wrote a poem called by the same name.
She was 'country'. Her sister-in-law was Pasty Montana.
Hers was about seeing a glimpse of herself through the stages of life.
Youth - Teenager - Adult - Old - and then on the verge, knowing there's nothing left to do - but . . . .
. . . . . .I gathered yours much the same but in 'a variable form'.

5 star write my poet friend.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
Jude, Excellent exposition of a 'glimpse' very penetrating write.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
...or being part of the whole, like a stained-glass, pixels coming together...
Great write!

Georg


Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
This lovely poem reminds me of times I've sat in church and stared at the stained glass window behind the chancel and watched the play of light through the colorful glass. Your poem adds another dimension with the illusion of someone's image in shadow form materializing--perhaps even Christ--depending upon what is in one's thoughts.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
This brought with it such a stunning image of the form and shape of someone in a chappel looking out but also someone outside looking in. then thoughts start drifting to life as it pertains to this write and really blew me away with the patterns that came out of it.

fee

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 7, 2009
This leaves me in that place where I would be wondering if I really saw what I knew I felt, or if it was just the imaginings of a woman who came from over the edge. The spiritual forms are the hardest to accept as present and the easiest to cause me to wonder. This is a well woven tapestry of color, gut knowledge and emotion, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
Ephemeral yet eternal,so exquisite in its composition, mysterious as reflections can be.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
This is as beautiful as the spectrum you speak of. A glimpse, then gone... but the memory remains. Outstanding.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 6, 2009
there is a feel good to this expression, I noticed :)



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