anyone who can write that second stanza and make it sing they way you do; sure has spent some time considering the origin point of those SEA O F DREAMS. a de(in)finite #10!
Jude, rhythmic and sensual -- explosive and powerfully suggestive -- this sea of dreams enraptures and seduces the imagination -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
I hear this poem sea of dreams in mute mode via a cascading waterfall, silenced in reverence to concentrated transmission to and fro a galactic community of sensual artists living in a hippie commune scented with the wonderful fragrance of cosmic cannabis and voyeuristically watching group sex upon a sea of dreams in an orgy of ultra-violet light dancing upon a blacklight poster of naked bodies...engaging in like a Timothy Leary LSD experiment for documentation...it evokes many visions, Jude...
I almost fell into "MY SEA OF DREAMS" to STAY! by Fishing lately...As I said in one of my recent poems
I love the eloquence you speak of in this illuminating Poem Jude/Dude...
Who? is this you speak of, Romantic Victoria maybe...
or some other inspirational muse, that peaked your mind and pen!?
This is exquisite and the words you use astound me!
All I can say is, I LOVE IT!
I want more!
WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and Hugs, Purple_PassionS_Pulsing, SHEExooo
concentrating on the manifestation of "new and bold forms" is exactly what our species' collective consciousness needs to evolve; a shame there is so much noise "out there" and so few skilled in
mindful focus...
always illuminating, dear poet!
carolyn
Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Your words are the light of poetry, touching our minds, our hearts, and our soul. :)
You write here with such a clear, strong voice of considered observations that are, in themselves, deeply immersed in mystical manifestations of the largely invisible, wholly felt and divinely intuited. The thoughts seem of a revelatory nature in the sense that this form of knowledge is not attained through cerebral, rational knowledge but rather is exchanged through the deep waters and vibrations of the soul. Underwater worlds are endlessly fascinating; like the seven-eigths of an iceberg, I think of life like this: the greater part being that which is, indeed, spiritual and unseen.
... No moans here... just a mouth opening and shutting against the glass! :)) A heart-swelling, foot-webbing, gill-growing write for certain sure, Kartero: makes me think of Atlantis and The Little Mermaid... and a sea of happy hippos I see beneath me, too! :)) LOL Kollagen Kate xx
"...from the depths of a mysterious kingdom..." the author could be telling us of a lovely ethereal entity or a dungeon's monster roaming inside a bubble of a dream or nightmare and waking us up with "moans of light"
A voice so soft and sensual that only a special ear can hear these moans of light,
No one can express depth of emotions as you can, Jude, you inspire passion and bioluminescent enlightenment!
A poem that touches me deeply.
Peace, love, and light, my friend,
Amber "V"
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I love the eloquence you speak of in this illuminating Poem Jude/Dude...
Who? is this you speak of, Romantic Victoria maybe...
or some other inspirational muse, that peaked your mind and pen!?
This is exquisite and the words you use astound me!
All I can say is, I LOVE IT!
I want more!
WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and Hugs, Purple_PassionS_Pulsing, SHEExooo
mindful focus...
always illuminating, dear poet!
carolyn
Sheila
Exquisite in its rhythmic flows and imagery.
John
Somebody near needs to get a life.
Ron
... No moans here... just a mouth opening and shutting against the glass! :)) A heart-swelling, foot-webbing, gill-growing write for certain sure, Kartero: makes me think of Atlantis and The Little Mermaid... and a sea of happy hippos I see beneath me, too! :)) LOL Kollagen Kate xx
fee
That kinda rocks man !
Jerry D
"Your heart...Your thoughts...your voice..." captures each moment.
Blessings and Love - Micke
Cheers,
Dan
Take care,
Sherry
Georg
the mind and take it prisoner...one of a kind, Jude!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Left speechless
Anything I would have to say
Would only take away.
No one can express depth of emotions as you can, Jude, you inspire passion and bioluminescent enlightenment!
A poem that touches me deeply.
Peace, love, and light, my friend,
Amber "V"