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sea of dreams
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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 your heart is bioluminescent,

 generating its own light

   in the emotional obscurity

 surrounding the environ

 occupied throughout a sea of dreams

 

 your thoughts are unusual creatures

rarely noticed by other’s eyes

   unless upraised

 from the depths of a mysterious kingdom,

 from a rare habitat displaying new and bold forms

subtle and soft

 yet bursting with passion and sensation

 

 your voice is shadowy and silent,

    exploring the valley and caverns

    of mystifying venues and steamy gorges

 

 your lips swell in awe and anticipation,

     and your tongue, expresses moans of light

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on September 7, 2009
anyone who can write that second stanza and make it sing they way you do; sure has spent some time considering the origin point of those SEA O F DREAMS. a de(in)finite #10!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 22, 2009
Jude, rhythmic and sensual -- explosive and powerfully suggestive -- this sea of dreams enraptures and seduces the imagination -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 20, 2009
I hear this poem sea of dreams in mute mode via a cascading waterfall, silenced in reverence to concentrated transmission to and fro a galactic community of sensual artists living in a hippie commune scented with the wonderful fragrance of cosmic cannabis and voyeuristically watching group sex upon a sea of dreams in an orgy of ultra-violet light dancing upon a blacklight poster of naked bodies...engaging in like a Timothy Leary LSD experiment for documentation...it evokes many visions, Jude...

Sage

Reviewed on August 18, 2009
I almost fell into "MY SEA OF DREAMS" to STAY! by Fishing lately...As I said in one of my recent poems
I love the eloquence you speak of in this illuminating Poem Jude/Dude...
Who? is this you speak of, Romantic Victoria maybe...
or some other inspirational muse, that peaked your mind and pen!?
This is exquisite and the words you use astound me!
All I can say is, I LOVE IT!
I want more!

WRITE ON!
Blessings, Peace and Hugs, Purple_PassionS_Pulsing, SHEExooo

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
Truly beautiful! Creating a playground where one's mind can relax and play. SC

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
concentrating on the manifestation of "new and bold forms" is exactly what our species' collective consciousness needs to evolve; a shame there is so much noise "out there" and so few skilled in
mindful focus...
always illuminating, dear poet!
carolyn

Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
Your words are the light of poetry, touching our minds, our hearts, and our soul. :)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 14, 2009
dreamy and visual.........so lush pax A

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Love the part about thoughts, Jude. Great poem:)
Sheila

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Jude,
Exquisite in its rhythmic flows and imagery.

John

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Gawd, I'm so hot I regurgitated! ;-) Back to your dream scenes.

Somebody near needs to get a life.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
You write here with such a clear, strong voice of considered observations that are, in themselves, deeply immersed in mystical manifestations of the largely invisible, wholly felt and divinely intuited. The thoughts seem of a revelatory nature in the sense that this form of knowledge is not attained through cerebral, rational knowledge but rather is exchanged through the deep waters and vibrations of the soul. Underwater worlds are endlessly fascinating; like the seven-eigths of an iceberg, I think of life like this: the greater part being that which is, indeed, spiritual and unseen.

... No moans here... just a mouth opening and shutting against the glass! :)) A heart-swelling, foot-webbing, gill-growing write for certain sure, Kartero: makes me think of Atlantis and The Little Mermaid... and a sea of happy hippos I see beneath me, too! :)) LOL Kollagen Kate xx

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
You speak eloquently of a world I am familiar and very fond of.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
I see your still writing with the passion that makes the reader think and feel what you are expressing. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Great visual images in this romantic ode Jude. Its a good one!!!....M

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Wow...definately one of your ultimate bests...

fee

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Get down and at them is your style
That kinda rocks man !

Jerry D

Reviewed on August 10, 2009
How serene to float in your sea, Jude.
"Your heart...Your thoughts...your voice..." captures each moment.
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
great expression in this write, enjoyed, LadyJ

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
It starts out as a "sea of dreams", but it ends with what seems more like reality. Nice write...

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Jude, quite simply, this is a jewel.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
...read this a few times..and will read it again..Superb Jude!

Reviewed on August 10, 2009
You create worlds with your words Jude.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Your Sea of Dreams sounds like quite a place.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
jasmin said it all. Wonderful in its depiction and sensuousity.

Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Having the deepest moments expressed with such a tender and artistic touch, you are a fountain of soul my friend. Bless you! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
You sucked me in with this captivating offering. You write of things that can only be known by the soul. Excellent, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Jude, to tell you this is beautiful would not be saying enough. This goes into my library.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 10, 2009
"...from the depths of a mysterious kingdom..." the author could be telling us of a lovely ethereal entity or a dungeon's monster roaming inside a bubble of a dream or nightmare and waking us up with "moans of light"

Georg


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Another of your spellbinding pieces that captivate
the mind and take it prisoner...one of a kind, Jude!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Thoughts certainly can be unusual creatures. Rare within the species. Another beauty.

Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Oh, my, Jude, this is breathtakingly beautiful - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Unbelievable. how can you know me this well?

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
Blindless
Left speechless
Anything I would have to say
Would only take away.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 9, 2009
A voice so soft and sensual that only a special ear can hear these moans of light,
No one can express depth of emotions as you can, Jude, you inspire passion and bioluminescent enlightenment!
A poem that touches me deeply.
Peace, love, and light, my friend,
Amber "V"


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