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gurgle
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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at times, the voices speaking to me

are barely audible

 

rarely sharing an intimate tone

or authentic syllable

 

relating distant sounds

resounding dreams’ psychobabble,

 

echoing cavernous outgrowths

traversed by indiscernible, lost explorers …

 

at times, the guts of expression

reflect contours of broken mirrors

 

and rippling currents of stormy seas

seen only in the eye of a distant beholder,

 

flowing erratically, tempestuous

spotlights of vacant gurgle

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on September 28, 2009
This is so mysterious and haunting. Like a dream falling away. Nicely penned, Jude.
Sheila

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 24, 2009
I can so very much relate to this meaningful write, Jude. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 24, 2009
yes the 'gurgles' play there tricks and we relay the psychobabble...
Great pen!

Reviewed on September 23, 2009
just like dreams Robert, even when we're awake the mind plays tricks, puts out a lot of babble. Some people seprate their babble from their good thoughts and conversation but have you ever noticed, some let it come right out their mouth, and you either want to slap them or retreat before anymore foolishness spurts out, at times I get to babbling in my verse, then I say, no I can't write that.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 23, 2009
At times the psychobabble can be inspiring. And then there's the rest of the time.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 23, 2009
right now all iv'e been hearing is gurgles..,splendid, jude...

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on September 23, 2009
Listen to the Whispers! ...even if you have to yell and scream at everything that keeps you from hearing, Jude! :) HEY!!! How are you!?
I've been in the "gurgle" I can relate!
Love your pen!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 23, 2009
at times, the voices speaking to me
are barely audible

And those are probably the ones we need to hear the most.




Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
There are often times, usually in the middle of a sleepless night, where I, too, hear those "gurgles."

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Jude - Enjoyed reading "gurgle," attention grabbing title. Especially liked the way you used near rhymes i.e., audible ... syllable ... psychobabble, and explorers ... mirrors ... beholder. Liked the physical images, too, especially liked,

at times, the guts of expression

reflect contours of broken mirrors

- David


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
So that's where you get the fantasma--you hear voices! Gurgles only come at death or from babies... which one is this? Great lines, like,'contours of broken mirrors,' as usual.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Such precise analysis here of undefined entities of "white noise" and intuitive/arcane mystery. Love the way this seeks to focus both inwards and outwards, searching and flowing along avenues that are deeply personal/visceral as well as distant and far-reaching. I can't help making the comparison in my mind of your final couplet - with its erratic, chaotic, haphazard gurgle - with the Christian scriptures which speak of God bringing creational order through purposeful spoken Word. And I can heartily appreciate the "babbling" wavelengths and vibrations at the moment, too, focussing as I have been on Annette Messager's "The Messengers" art exhibition which features, extraordinarily enough, items used in your imagery here: ESP indeed! :)) xx

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
I like this as it seems the voices that speak to all of us all sometimes have their own little "gurgle" that only apply to us.

fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Is the writer victim or beneficiary of the gurgle.
I opt for the latter, Jude, as you demonstrate here
once again. -gene.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Mouthwash will never be the same. Great stuff again as always:-)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
very thought provoking piece!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Perhaps your receptors are not as open to the truth as you think they are, Jude. You are still allowing the conflicting conversations of question to cloud your experiences. Let go of that which does not come from within, drop the surrounding spin and clarity will come to you. It took a few reads for me to actually grasp the soul of this poem, but after sleeping on it and reading it again, it became clear. Good work!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 22, 2009
Jude,
...better not say much or i'll be in trouble; if with Sage, action, if not, reaction.

John

PS much appreciate the larger font
jf

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Written like it was from the fly in the wall, a third person, an observer, detached and yet, like it was experienced before.
Difficult to see if the poet is trying for us to gurgle or if he's the gurglee...

Georg


Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Lately and at times, I have been having insomnia, I cannot sleep because of all of the messages I am hearing and the energy I am feeling keep me from sleeping.
Saturday night at 4 am I finally fell asleep! Gurgling sounds of distant tempestuous feelings all over my mind, are you reading it? I feel closely connected to this poem Jude, as if you have ESP and are hearing my thoughts..wow quite awesome actually, I am the one that usually is hearing other people's thoughts and feeling their energy.
This poem brings many images to my mind, but the most vivid is like Sage said, messages from the Universe at work here. Go with it, you are on your way to your destiny!

Much peace, love, and light, dear friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
thank god that this is only "at times"... but dear me: the dearth, the dearth... in a Brando-like gutterance from some Apocalypse Yet set, the monotone delivery is everything... and yet, methinks if I ramble on enough I myself may fall victim to the scathing satiric invective laced in the lines of this distant verse.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Very astute in the observations of all that is....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 21, 2009
Gurgle is a follow-up of opposition. Your astral body has not cut the cord yet to the shell of your physical body, noting that a great many spirit mediums receive their "spirit messages" by means of poltergeist like gurgles, raps, knocks, thumping steps, ringing doorbells and whisper voices as telepathic messages. Etheric objects exist in psychic space and can be projected by means of ESP while carrying it with full consciousness.

"relating distant sounds

resounding in dreams’ psychobabble,"

and...then this first couplet, has intriguing value for me as it pertains to "automatism" which is "automatic writing" - trance speech and "spirit writing" when the message is written backwards, in anagrams or mirror style, or a planchette with a pencil holder like a pointer in a ouija board...placed under the medium's hand, resting on a polished surface bearing the letters of the alphabet.

"at times, voices writing

are barely audible or even visible"

Your last few poems have been clairvoyant categorized, Jude...these are messenger times for you...you're being instructed on the astral plane by spirit guides...have your ears been having a ringing tone, especially your right ear? Hearin aum, the musical tones of violins in your head...if so, a crystal quartz prism can pick up the messages...

Love,
Sage


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