inspiring expiring (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 18, 2011

I really hope that's the way it's gonna be.....

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on December 2, 2011

well done

Reviewed on November 30, 2011

I wanted to read it as what we wish to see.....optimistic dreams fade , there is a sometimes you get what you need feel to this. a new phase....cool poem. Morgan

Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on November 25, 2011

Excellent words of seeing into another realm, Jude. You will, I believe, continue to write, to see all the dreams of your future before the moonbeams melt! Excellent, thought provoking write.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

you never fail to take me away off into another world nice soothing write

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

And it will be as easy and as wonderful as that if you accept what others who have left and returned have had to say on the matter. Lovely and soothing, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

Looking into the sun and into eternity ~
Poetic elegance with ethereal perfection!

Reviewed by Cela Shearer

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

Just a wonderful vision in so few words.

Reviewed by Carma Chan

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

happy thoughts:)

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

Beautifully wrought, Jude, with dominant threads of melancholy. This insight sparkles. Stay focused, and keep writing. peace ... richard

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

From sea to shining stars...this sings Jude~

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

shooting star of a capture, jude!
love it!!!
carolyn

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on November 22, 2011

..and move to a more beautiful
plane of consciousness and understanding, Jude,
and i hope i will move there, too.

John

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

The depth of insight within this poem is stunning! I cannot tell you how beautiful this piece has turned out. Your descriptions are magical and meaningful. Breathtaking poetry at it's best from one of the best!!!

Peace, light and love,

Amber

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

I feel you are seeing far beyond the sea of darkness, the light is flowing in your pen. Bless ya!

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

Beautiful imagery of that moment of passing, and I love the title, which invited me to read. Your words reveal the brighter, eternal Light that will replace those "sunbeams" as you are transported to the place where there is no night.

Connie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

oh wow oh wow oh wow oh thou Apple of mine eye! Has SJ passed on his vision?! :)) xx

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

...as we all edge towards oblivion, poems like this remind us that we will not be oblivious of the end beyond the end in the end... an intriguing read, as usual.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

You...your pen is always so inspiring...thanks for sharing!!

Love (not expired :)

Tinka

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

As always I bow to your pen, your thoughts, and the beauty and expertise of your expression. You are inspiring.... < < <HUGS>>>Mikii

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

Wow! When I expire, with my feeble brain, I think I'll just be dead.

Your writing is always looking outward into the universe with a stream of consciousness that I can't even begin to comprehend.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on November 21, 2011

As long as you are able to see, and recognize, the "light of providence," you will be good, Jude . . .