AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Rachel Glasgow, iDebra Kraft, iFrank Ryan, iCharles Keller, iEmmanuel Laroche, iScott Zachary, iLeanne Bright Cloudman, iMaria Rushing, iFrances Altman, iJames Harvey, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

jude forese

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· Blog
· 939 Titles
· 34,550 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2001

jude forese, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!



dashboard dreams
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

I don’t wait too long for my shadow
         to catch up to me
 
actually, I don’t have much of a choice
    unless I decide to hide in the bushes
                or take a swim
                          in an indoor pool
 
       or travel to a very misty sea
               or perhaps the really cold, murky East River
                                                        or shower under the rainy trees in Central Park
 
sometimes, my shadow just disappears
          from my angle of perspective
 
                  maybe it decides to detach
     and visit the Bronx Zoo
          to surreptitiously watch
   the lions, tigers, and bears
 
 and i'm left looking into parallel directions
     where there’s no one to talk to
              so I think of silhouettes and in metaphors
 
          then again, Bellevue’s not too far away
but I rather go to the Bowery or the Cloisters
            or perhaps a jaunt to MOMA
 
         maybe visit papa’s grave
       or mother’s bones
 
     I walk in front myself
so I can see what I’m leaving behind
 
            the art I visualize
 are pictographs of words
                filtering through my mind
 
choosing which colorful blur
                        to look for
   while writing my memoir onto the pavement in chalk
 
        waiting to hail an unlicensed cab
 
         just to crash into another
                                one of my dashboard dreams

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "dashboard dreams"
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 13, 2011
I remember from this posting a song called Me & My Shadow & I have to think that shadows are the ways our guardian angels are actually seen...sorry I missed this one as my computer was out getting its memory flushed out...wish that could be done for me personally...e

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 11, 2011
LOL!! I can visualise so much of this and the idea of you skulking in the bushes to give your Jiminy Cricket shadow-conscience the slip makes me roar! :)) "I walk in front myself so I can see what I’m leaving behind" reminds me of my old Tourist poem and I truly regret not snapping up the last remaining ticket to see Alicia Keys at MSG when I was over in 2010 as her "Empire State of Mind" song was always in my head as I cruised up and down Madison Avenue Consequently I never did trust myself to those "gypsy" cabs she mentions, fully expecting them, as you say here, to crash and dash my travelling bag of dreams... A highly evocative mood-write, flying beneath the radar in your own home town as you are so wont to do, Kartero. How can I not love this?! :)) xx

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 9, 2011
the human psyche is a thing of wonder -- filled with impressions real and imagined -- we mold our perspectives and credos from their blend, fancy, truth, desire and rebellion among the semi-homogeneous sludge of possibilities -- your metaphorical shadow is one of those self projections we utilize judge-mentally and as escapes when reality is too mundane and disgusting to contend with -- lest we become a slave to our shadows we periodically venture into the bad stuff, reality -- that is where the real rub exists -- I bid you joy,love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on December 8, 2011
You brought me back to the city I love and the state where I was born! Pavement chalk done better in the Bronz than any place I know!An ingeniuous piece of poetry; very well done, Jude.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 8, 2011
Hey Jude,
Your poem brings me right to my childhood, when I would visit my relatives in the Bronx. The zoo, central park all part of my history. Recently though, I finally went to the Moma with adult eyes, and it is one fantastic place to spend hours of your day.
Such idyllic thoughts here in this poem, kinda like a day in the mind of Jude. wow it is definitely one superb thought after another. It kept my interest from the opening line until the finale!

You are a genius, Sir Jude! Keep on writing, it's always a pleasure to read your work.

Much peace, light, and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
Marvelous with a bit of whimsical!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
whew, you had a busy day :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
A lot going on here: shadowboxing, Bronx dreaming, bio blogging, and just plain living. Tells a lot about your neck of the woods. Enjoyed.

Ron

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
..a bit of seek, hide and seperation at times we need to explore them all~ your poem is superb Jude!

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
Good poem, jude. For some reason it made me "flashback" to about age eight, walking hand-in-hand with my parents past a street lamp and noticing our shadows. It was the first time I noticed my shadow. My folks did their best to explain what it was, but even at age eight it didn't really sink in. Instead it made me shiver in fear because the discussion reminded me of the radio show The Shadow, and that scary laugh. It was years before I learned that The Shadow was a good guy. Funny how bad memories can turn into good ones, and vice versa I suppose.

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
Just wondering....do you walk backwards? "I walk in front of myself so I can see what I'm leaving behind" I know, I know, there is a much deeper meaning, but I am more simple-minded.
When I was a Mommy, I had eyes in the back of my head, but they were slowly absorbed into my brain to become wisdom and experience for my post-Mommy life.
Anyway, back to your poem, I enjoyed seeing into your mind as you shared your dashboard dreams. You surely own the most interesting shadow I have encountered!

Connie

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
A fine poem, Jude, well done.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
There is a lot of clarification of the "how" that makes up the poet, here. Then there is that place for the little bit of insanity that we all possess, which is ever lurking, like our shadow, very close to the edge of who we are. Intriguing offering, Jude.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
the art I visualize
are pictographs of words
filtering through my mind

And you do it extremely well. As one who often hides in bushes attempting to hide my shadow from frightened animals I'm trying to catch, I can relate.


Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on December 6, 2011
If I could crash into anything...if I had the choice...I would pick one of your 'dashboard dreams'...and thank you for finding and expressing the you who writes such dreams for us to read...this is why you are amongst my favorite five poets in the world...Yours is so unique in its expression and style,it always is a dream for me to touch on.
Best wishes and love to you and yours
from
kay


New Poetry by jude forese
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  6.  Spindrift
  7.  Kindness
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  Our Restless Minds
  10.  Roadkill Memoriam
  11.  In The Still of The Night
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Dream Just a Dream
  14.  Feeling Lonely
  15.  Hunting for Truth
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  Whisper Pens
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  20.  Mythical Dragons
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Poetry Pages: A Collection of Voices From Around the World Volume II by Erin Kelly-Moen

A people’s heart can be found in their poetic words. In history men and women have stood firmly upon their soapboxes and street corners, rallying the deepest beliefs of people to rise up and be heard. The poetrypages.com has offered that voice a new  
Member BookAds

Kind A SLOw In The Kootenays v2.2 by RickthePoetWarrior

Has-beens and coffee get together to recreate a same old new tourist trap in a land even the First Nations don't want.  
Member BookAds

Opening Acts - 2nd Edition by David Clure

Over 40 poems in this new edition of "Opening Acts". Get yours today...  
Member BookAds