I am falling through a cloud
twirling ‘round and ‘round,
a freefall with no beginning or end
I don’t know if I’m up or down
or how I’ve gotten here,
but as I pass a passenger ship
I remember I’m dreaming,
the logic of the situation befriends me
oh, I wish I had a parachute
I wish I could descend real slow
no sooner thought of,
I’m holding onto red nylon chords
as a bright yellow parachute
ripples in the wind above me
I have to admit,
the mystery and outcome
is both daunting as well as exhilarating
as I break through the cloud
I’m find myself inside another misty apparition,
a dense fog raining crystal balls
with rainbow bubbles surrounding me
there is a lighthouse in the far distance
and I can taste sea salt on my lips
and see the moon through a clearing in the fog
my legs waltz in the wind
and as I get closer to the ground
my heart is pumping so hard
I feel as though I’m in a musical
dancing to the beat of tropical drums
there’s a stage of souls waiting just below me
having performed in a play
they’re all waiting to take a final bow
as I land between their eyes
there’s a giant curtsy
aimed to the stars dancing beneath my feet
is both daunting as well as exhilarating"
Keep waltzing, Jude...brilliant!
Carole~
And what an entrance you have made in this dream. What will the performance be like, with an entrance so grand as this parachute thrill. As I read your poem, for the second time, I began to open up and feel what you were dreaming about. So many visuals brought me to mind. I especially love the part where you see crystal balls raining through the fog, it sounds exciting. I have never parachuted, but in my dreams I too, fly, and it all seems so real.
Thanks for sharing your flying adventure, looking forward to more dream juice poetry...I really need to start writing my dreams down.
Amazing as always,
peace and love,
Amber
~~ A giant curtsy to the star behind this creation xox :-)
...your tenth dreamjuice is as evocative as it should be for a 'perfect ten' ... j-for jubilance... jollity... Juvenalian...
...waiting for the topper...
Peace prevails...
Roger
Images of this dream spectacular beneath the stars.
Well crafted Jude.
Lady Mary Ann
as image, tremendous fluency
and naturalness here, Jude...
"I wish I could descend real slow"
ah yes, that's the one that hits home..
i must read the others, i have a lot of
catching up to do
john
"parachute" dream *Jude* bring on the wind!!!
Lady Vivian
Take care,
Sherry
Rose
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