query into leaving (poem) by jude forese on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 13, 2012

jude, a posit? - for the assumption is that we in fact, are - interesting for the fascination of the next, the final state - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on July 23, 2012

Your wit is right-on Jude.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 19, 2012

An interesting query, Robert, with a fine 'tongue in cheek' spirit

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 19, 2012

I was enjoying this until I read below that Matlack wants a job in the nude!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

luv it, Jude! witty and sharp

anyone comin back, Jack?
(to tell us how it is on the other side)

john

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

...just drop off the key, Lee... and get yourself free... no need to be coy, Roy... hop on the bus, Gus, don't need to discuss much... yeah... 50 ways to leave your Lover... Rhymin' Simon... this little ditty is fit Forese...

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

Kind of made me wonder if its just random names or people you know ... Since you started this, the first song that came to mind was, hit the road Jack and dont you come back, no more no more no more no more. That will be stuck in my head today ... ;) lol

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

Feelings for one and all..
Lady Vivian

*jude* clever are the questions

Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

A nice sing-songy pattern.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

Very playful :-)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

... in de nude, Jude; boy, Eddie M sure has you sussed, Babe! Munching on a melon, Helen; with a mate, Kate... and kinda late: Man, this really works! LOL!! And it's never too late to rise, Guys, and that ain't lies. And I'm hopin prior to Kingdom Come, rather than after... or at least as well as. Thanks, this is just what the doctor ordered for me today, Bugs. xx

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on July 18, 2012

keep going jude...this is an intersting write...just didn't last long enough

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

Well Jude,
This surely is quite a unique write. I find myself singing the song from our teens, 50 ways to leave your lover...but somehow I believe this is more about how one will be leaving this Earth for better places...Obsession with the unevitable is quite enlightening.
Just check out your back, Jack, make no plan, Stan, live for today, May, love for ever, Trevor, kiss my nose, Rose, take out the trash, Stash, wow, I guess you can go on and on and on with this...lol

Another mind bender from the Shaman....

Much peace, light, and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

Acoustics are good in hell...rhymes reverberate...ashes pave the way with a one-way ticket let those jealous poets stew while me an' you have a brew dark lager ale and peek at the titties on the Hooters widget!

Love & Bronx globes,
Sage

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

Simple verses, but its power is in its very simplicity. There's a sense of poignancy...,.

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

Kind of reminds me of the Paul Simon song, 50 Ways To Leave Your Lover. Interesting offering, Jude, it feels like a prologue to something more.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

Gonna go away far, Bob,
Till I find me a job.

Gonna enjoy to travel, Jude,
Want a job in the nude,
Don't want to though, to you appear rude...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 17, 2012

I was ready for ten more of those, kinda getting in tha groove, don'tja'no. I can tell you how Gil is going to feel, like he has finally found God and God spit in his eye.