Less is almost always more and you're right..who needs approval, they're merely opinions and just like, well, you know, everybody has one.Patrick

Jude,
This could be a rap song, but there is more to it than just rhythm.
I love the line massage your soul, that is what your poetry does to me.
Much peace, light and love,
Amber

~Jude~
Comtemplating to massage our soul~~tat da
Your heart of poetry is unique.

Lady Mary Ann

Cracked bard sane. The free spirit of Kate Tempest would like this one. Okie-doke, hip-hop Gangsta Rabbit; I'll never mention the 'c'-word again - even though you know there must be more than a few who would welcome a bit of tongue-tied-massage! :) sK-B xx

Hooray to the wonderment of
your poetry, jude

Lady Vivian

Part of it comes from the synergy of the media pool. Do we really compete like news reporters? Ir's a fine line I think. M.True

As I read it out loud, it sounds local ;) loved the last four lines ... Write on, Jude!

I appreciate the philosophical point of view that you express through your verses here, Jude. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

which demons do you speak of Trask? ... there's so many ... i would be honored for someone so well versed in the subject to elaborate on their subtleties and perhaps educate me ... please do ...

Maybe Its Those Demons-Huh!


GEEEEZS Someone Criticize Your Junk-

Delete Review Like All other A D A's Do!

TRASK...

I really like the lingo and the message was a massage. May we speak our peace In poetry and not be worried about approval by anyone other than little old us.

Did the title of my poem give you the idea?

Ron

not sure my words have such a choice, they seem to arrive, as you say "witless"

I too, like sherry below, believe that talent such as yours is a gift to be shared...thanks for doing just that w/out ego/vanity

I think sometimes the poetry writes itself, and demands to be heard...despite what we as mere poets think...it's whether we have the courage to carry this through...or we choose to remain tongue tied...
Diana...

a quite deep thought provoking write
budd

Like Paintings, Poetry either creates an image that the reader is seeking to discover, or words that reflect the Poets Soul.

Not sure about the Post Modern Linguistics. But nice read...

I have always felt that anything I have written, any of my photographs, paintings, drawings, etc. should go on to live a life of their own once I have completed them. Vanity? I have none in these realms because I believe the ability to do these things is a gift that was always intended to be shared. I love the simplicity of the text in this offering and the depth of the content.
Take care,
Sherry

I agree with you, but who cares about vanity? Rely on your heart’s language; it knows best. Thank you for sharing. Love Emile

Sometimes ya gotta say what ya gotta....

Yep. When you're right, you're right. Still, we come on sites such as AD and others to put our words out there. We appreciate it when someone reads and comments. Otherwise we would not bother.