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suggestive assertions
by jude forese → (All Poetry by jude forese)
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distracting
electronic toys
swarm the powerful experimental dream

sing to us
with fearful teardrops
controlling the thoughts
of our mother earth

just keep it in balance
at least appear to be sincere

don't blow our ass to bits

keep alive
where few survive

look before you leap too far
tackle what seems impenetrable

say hello before you depart

 

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 Reviews of "suggestive assertions"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on August 11, 2014
reflective sentiment - like a bee buzzing from flower to flower... M.True

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 11, 2014
don't blow our ass to bits
say hello before you depart

Words to live by, these days.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 10, 2014
Stark, harsh, and real; no punches held back; I quite like your style and what you express as always, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace I hope,

Regis

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on August 10, 2014
...provocative take on a problem that does not appear in its
final form...rather it evolves over time...through the use of
trial and error...and many more lessons to be learned...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 10, 2014
potent message delivered as to the state of affairs - keep the balance for sure

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 10, 2014
Some very good thoughts on how to behave. Is anyone listening?

Ron

Reviewed on August 10, 2014
Too many things are happening around the world these days, it's hard to see clearly with one's own eyes because of the media. Like Sherry has said:

"There is so much we can control in our lives that it is foolish to concern ourselves with that which we cannot control."

I think that was spot on good advice!

Sandie

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 9, 2014
Well,Bob, u will be one of the many to first be blown to bits as living where you live will be the first to be targeted...though I won't be far behind you...-e-

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 9, 2014
Don't let the spin that goes on around you stop you from enjoying everything life has to offer...truly, it is only a dream and soon enough it will morph into something else. In times, such as these, it is perhaps good practice to keep our house in order and live within the world we have created for ourselves. There is so much we can control in our lives that it is foolish to concern ourselves with that which we cannot control. Concise poetry, Jude, meaty and point made.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 9, 2014
Hey Jude,
You choose your words carefully, as does many who are aware and cautious of the consequences for our actions.
It's too bad that the world has evolved as it is today, but honestly, it will change again and again before we leave this earth. We have to make the best of the years we have left and live in peace love and hope for the light to shine on all.
To you my dear man,
Peace, light and love,
Amber

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 9, 2014
JUDE, THE WORLD IS TURNED COMPLETELY UPSIDE DOWN...WE CAN HARDLY BELIEVE THE THINGS WE SEE, WORSE LESS...HEAR. THE ONLY THING I TRULY BELIEVE IN THESE DAYS IS THE WORD OF GOD. I DON'T EVEN TRY TO FIGURE OUT 'TRUE MEANINGS' ANYMORE, I JUST KEEP MY EYES ON 'HIM' 'CAUSE HE HAS PROMISED TO KEEP ME IN PERFECT PEACE, IF I DO...AND IT WORKS! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on August 9, 2014
I sense foreboding; love the brevity and choice of words.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 9, 2014
advice to the weary, perhaps?...

Reviewed on August 9, 2014
Brief but packs a punch!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 8, 2014
Sadly, don't think purple/white earmuffs and a skateboard are going to get us far enough away these days, Kartero.

so they decide
to observe experience from a distance
instead of jumping into its sea head first

Looking and leaping; but just where is there to leap to? OK, you first.

Skull Bee could have written this one. Will be interested to read his comments. There's no place to avoid the hum, the hive is about to implode but the Beatles still sing... "You say goodbye, and I say hello... hello... hello..." No need anymore just to Imagine. Ciao for now, Amigo. xx


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