The mind is revelatory in this version, rather than wiping out or forgetting. Allowing the spirit do the 'crossing over' instead of the mind makes for spiritual growth rather than mental oblivion - but it's the vision and fortitude of the heart that enables both. It forms its own ideas about what 'home' (natural or supernatural) it wants to be a part of and create. It's fascinating how you change nuance and meaning with the various interchanges of words and ideas. xx
This is a great poem! 'Makes one wonder about some children, who, at the age of four, compose and play great masterpieces!!! How many lifetimes have they lived? I find this exciting. Thank you.
I kind of look forward to that day where I can learn of how much I have actually grown, though I have some knowledge of it already, I still want to know of it further...-e-
A thinking persons type of poem indeed. We fail to recollect at times how much we are different in our thinking but then realize the goals sought have been accomplished.
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I like this
the heart does get weary, but knows it must carry on.
personally grateful for this moving write...
carolyn
hug
Kathy
Mary
Peace be with you
William
Bravo.
Regis
ChipB.
Love ya!
Jane
This is such a tender poem. So full of emotion and energy.
I can feel your heart!
Dreams reveal all that we need to know. It is how we survive our daily life crossing over from those dreamscapes into reality.
As always, very deeply poignant poetry!
Peace, light and love,
Amber
George
J K Roseline