I was delighting in running with the strong visuals in each stanza - until the last! :) Like you, think I'll look for something more fragrant to chew on... A big picture very neatly compressed. xx
Hey Jude,
Very thought provoking poetry.
We always need something new to digest, I do it every day!
Otherwise, I think I would be moon dust in the the wind.
Great poetry in motion!
Peace, light and love
Amber
I think that maybe I should just keep my head in my permanent vertical smile as I don't want to be around & see what happens when our world does go out with a great BOOM...-e-
The newness is the key to our eyes wide open
to digest ever learning experiences...Great expressive
thoughts..
Lady Mary Ann
Love ya!
Jane
of the many tribes as they diverge at the crossroads of life.
Very thought provoking poetry.
We always need something new to digest, I do it every day!
Otherwise, I think I would be moon dust in the the wind.
Great poetry in motion!
Peace, light and love
Amber