In a state of wonder, as how these feelings surfaced
Floated up a new, all because I thought
For a brief second caught
A rearview glimpse of you
Alone
Head up, eyes forward
Silent
Snassano 07-06-07a
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Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
...that final strophe was culminating... . ending. ..
blending how souls can become intertwined and that last long look after separation can sometimes barely be deciphered:: is that you or me im staring at? which one of us is leaving? being left?
but also, this feels like a whole life, not jsut a person. ..
it has the introspectiveness of awareness of self, trying to change their soul. ..or leave a mark. .and the ghost of what we were, what we've done, keeps behind us always. ..
and we get to a point of unrecognition, of where am i?
such double intendres.
and i love the silence bereft and stoic in the finality.
> <
M()()nFlo)/\(eR
I think whenever we lose someone we love (for whatever reason) one of the hardest things to face is that first someone we see looks like them or sounds them or says something just as they would.. I remember the first time it happened to me and it was tough.. This is quite a poignant piece of writing....
A case of the door that wouldn't totally close with the hope that whatever going/pushed/commanded out, like a boomerang, returned.
You will wait for a long time.
Silence will allways return.
Georg
Well, Sir Ifen someone scared Ya that bad, I guess Ya should be a thankin yore lucky stars that Ya got shed of them afore they could do Ya some harm! This was a beautiful touchin write! You are very talented! SC
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blending how souls can become intertwined and that last long look after separation can sometimes barely be deciphered:: is that you or me im staring at? which one of us is leaving? being left?
but also, this feels like a whole life, not jsut a person. ..
it has the introspectiveness of awareness of self, trying to change their soul. ..or leave a mark. .and the ghost of what we were, what we've done, keeps behind us always. ..
and we get to a point of unrecognition, of where am i?
such double intendres.
and i love the silence bereft and stoic in the finality.
> <
M()()nFlo)/\(eR
Myrna
You will wait for a long time.
Silence will allways return.
Georg
Thanks,
Dan