Take it all everything I once had is Now gone, away some things are just not meant to always stay ,the same, even if I tried my best, day after day walk on ,walk on leave it all behind the life, the family vanishing ties walk on walk on ,bye pile the things by the curb along with what ever the truth may be moving on to some other place maybe start anew, not interested in collecting things or people, or names I am chasing down whatever, my destiny may be on some high mountain peak, or some valley low you may be a big girl now I’m still a little boy If I’m really lucky and with a lot of work I’ll grow in spirit and integrity, and look back on this moment in time knowing then, that…….. back means it passed, like a summer rain soaking storm that is what I dream Snassano 02-10-08
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Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
... i just cant read lines anymore; my [he]art m.aches them into visual dreams and nuances. .. .but this feels so wet and hurt. ..more than anything or any one line.....
but the feel of you IN this is more than jsut the mention of rain, more than a storm, but its how you can laugh while still getting soaked to the skin, how you can throw your head down and cry with prayer or throw it back and laugh and howl, drinking it all down. ..
jsut a really wet write
mm mm
> <
'you may be a big girl now
I'm still a little boy'
In the midst of the pain in the piece I found these lines to be endearing somehow... and made me want to hug the 'little boy' and tell him it might not hurt so much in time...
Myrna
We witness the past fade and in regressing we bring it all to life once more. Love is tender as it grows and a fire of pain as it dies.
Love and blessings,
Susan
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but the feel of you IN this is more than jsut the mention of rain, more than a storm, but its how you can laugh while still getting soaked to the skin, how you can throw your head down and cry with prayer or throw it back and laugh and howl, drinking it all down. ..
jsut a really wet write
mm mm
> <
Walt
I'm still a little boy'
In the midst of the pain in the piece I found these lines to be endearing somehow... and made me want to hug the 'little boy' and tell him it might not hurt so much in time...
Myrna
Love and blessings,
Susan