These songs
I’ve heard all
before, now I’m one
traveling
on and on
wind and rain the snow from
above
clouds and dust, lost or found
heaven or hell
one of these days
I’ll have had it all figured out
another new green leaf
on this tree of life
just another song on the radio
riding those radio air waves
on and on, just as before
sweet voices soothing just another
Ridem' cowboy...er-um....earthboy? But how can you drive and not listen to the music? Is it possible? And it's gotta be songs you know and can sing along with, or drum on the dashboard and all over the stearing wheel.
I'm fresh out of puns here, and am mightilly disappointed in myself... so I'll quit here, and say I liked it. --Charlie
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
..."you turn me on, im a radio". . .. [are you channeling joni???]..."you dont like weak women, you get bored so quick / and you dont like strong women, cause theyre hip to your tricks". ..
i love the polarities in this....the near musical refrain of opposites, heaven and hell, clouds and dust was gorgeous. ...
and the allusion to Green Leaf. ....this is so windwhipped and nostalgic. ..
i bet i can name songs you never heard before :}
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(V)ooN
Music on the radio can be a blessing or a curse. If it is a song we like which allows for good memories, hearing the song again is a joy; if the song is one of sorrow or something that sparks a sad memory, the 3-5 minutes of airplay can be really tough to take.
Beautiful, emotive writing, Stan. Best wishes to you,
Jill
pretty original, and a GREAT title: just don't "ride those waves" out of our atmosphere into Deep Space, heading Light Years Away....unless you hope to meet some Aliens!
happy trails! michael guy
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
Excellent writing sweetie,have a wonderful and safe day...Hugssss
On the road again ... this song came to mind, reading your words - wherever your journey leads you, I pray you find the happiness you seek! Well written, Stan.
I'm fresh out of puns here, and am mightilly disappointed in myself... so I'll quit here, and say I liked it. --Charlie
i love the polarities in this....the near musical refrain of opposites, heaven and hell, clouds and dust was gorgeous. ...
and the allusion to Green Leaf. ....this is so windwhipped and nostalgic. ..
i bet i can name songs you never heard before :}
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(V)ooN
Beautiful, emotive writing, Stan. Best wishes to you,
Jill
Be always safe,
Karen
happy trails! michael guy
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Cheers and safe travels,
Dan
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.