As I cannot make an additional review on what Peter Schlosser wrote in his poem titled “God bless America“dated November 27, this year, I would like to add the following.
God Bless America & review for Peter Schlosser
“God Bless America.
The only society in the animal kingdom
Where the young devour their old."
Not the young devour their old
but the so-called leaders, and representatives,
who pretend defending the rights of the people,
even against their will,
not only devour the old,
but also recklessly mortgage the future of the young.
They are the ones who divide our people
and divide our families
while believing and letting us believe
that they are doing a good job.
We all know that they are dead wrong
The near future will prove it.
Copyright 2009 Emile Tubiana
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Reviews of "God Bless America & review for Peter Schlosser"
So true my friend, your write is powerful and full of thought provoking statements...I'm not sure what will be left for our youth at the rate we are going now. Enjoyed!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.
Stealing the thunder and being a wet blanket I will sound like, but may friends...God have so little to bless today around our country that we should tiptoe and no call more His attention to the mess we are in!
Well a definite improvement on my scanty little social quip re: the state of the State. But, ain't that the point though? One person throws a thought into the ring and the rest either run with it or offer a rebuttal. That's America. That's democracy. That's diplomatic and healthy politcal discourse. There should be more of this. Maybe start a blog or forum. In fact, now you have my wheels spinning...........take care.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 28, 2009
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