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Entanglement
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Entangled in an affair that should not have been!


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Entanglement
By Amber "V" Moonstone 10/16/07

Entangled in emotions,
Entrapped in desires,
Enraptured in your lust,
Enveloped by your charm.

Eventually lustful thoughts subside,
Evolving into discontent,
Extinguishing the fire;
Expecting nothing to admire.

Early in the night,
Evidence of irrevocable behavior
Erases all desire.
Emoting energy for defense

Escaping the deception
Eliminating the pain
Eradicating the connection
Evidently, nothing really lost.

author's notes:
Sometimes we get involved intimately, way too fast, and then we regret even meeting that person.
Wishing you, peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" Moonstone

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 Reviews of "Entanglement"
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on October 20, 2007
An interesting write with the use of E-verbs.

"Sometimes we get involved intimately, way too fast"
Stepping stones to growth and knowledge.

Reviewed by Paul Shakespeare (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2007
'Tis true...what often starts off as pure physical lust can get real nasty when emotions become involved. Either the man or the woman can't just leave at the "great sex" level. One starts to want more of the other (usually it's the woman because she is "wired" that way <smile>)

Enjoyed the write; full of wisdom!

All the best;
Roger

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
you write with much wisdom here

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
yeah I hear you loud and clear but I guess that is why we get our hearts broken so often because we are looking for the One to satisfy our unmet needs and until we do we keep looking-great poem Amber

Reviewed on October 17, 2007
-E- verything has a reason! Love this, brought much to mind!
and I love the dowwwwwwwwn E look, great descriptions!
The picture is alluring! love it too
BE SAFE!
WArmly, Warrior Lady Purple Sheeeoox
STay Positive!

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 17, 2007
I strongly agreed with your words here!
Must stop and think who would be hurt?
Beautifully written and expressed thoughts
Powerful write!!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 17, 2007
Sometimes we get involved intimately, way too fast, and then we regret even meeting that person.

How sadly true.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 17, 2007
To find if the wine is good, one must not thisrty swallow a mouthful, but let the nose take in its bouquet, the tongue slowly its taste until we know we want more or we just spit out the sour grapes.
Then, we will no regret being drunk from time to time with the "right" kind of "wine".
Georg

Reviewed by Joseph Manzo
Reviewed on October 16, 2007

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
Amber, this is beautiful and you do bring out many good points in such a delicate way. Yes, sometimes we allow the flutter of the heart strings lead us without thinking it through first...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
totally agree with SC ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
You captured the premise beautifully Amber! Something we all encounter at least once,and hopefully without too much damage left...

ET

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
Darlin! We are all guilty of havin runaway emotions, it is a poet's curse, most times it is a true train wreck, but sometimes it is pure magic! LOVE YOU! SC

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
It's always a treat when it's harmless. Later the tide turns and we find a noose around our necks.
Great wise poem.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
I found the repetition of the initial "E" very effective in driving the point home, Amber. And I can completely relate to what you express here. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
Powerful, easy to relate. Reread over and over. Great strength displayed.

--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
No matter how it begins, you end up hurt in the end! True write!!
Love,
annie

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
An outstanding write Amber
with so much deep emotions
What we need is another collab. to cheer you up
I'm Working on it
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
Ending for a new Beginning- (easy to happen, hard to do)
Best wishes, Christine

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
Free will shows up every time ~ Leading us where we need to be~Love Ted


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