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Depths of the Sea
by Michelle M Mead → (All Poetry by Michelle M Mead)
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Based on the painting of the same name by Edward Coley Burne-Jones


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Spread toes on
moss-covered stones
smiling welcome rains
silver slipping-
and soaked

and i dove,
because with you
diving is divine.

Breath, not to hold,
but to float-
smothered in you,
where heaven slept
i kissed your arm inside,
and pale-

and i swam with you
because you swim
the same lengths as me,
stroking.


Hair as shiny black eels,
too loose to strangle-
but yet,
in it up to the neck,
and then some-

and i go down with you
because with you is
peace and sin,
submission.

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 Reviews of "Depths of the Sea"
Reviewed by Laura Mckenzie (Reader)
Reviewed on February 9, 2009
Michelle Wow I love this one I am hosting a poetry contest on the ocean right now on poetry-soup you should join us there and become a member. Your talent is fresh and new and in-lighting I love your imagery so vivid and the art that you so nicely portrayed in your poetry! Love Laura :)

Reviewed by James Blaylock (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2008
Another great write. I loved this stanza...

Hair as shiny black eels,
too loose to strangle-
but yet,
in it up to the neck,
and then some-

jkb

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 11, 2008
Sensuous..unique...beautiful...as everything you write.

Reviewed by mario lew (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2008
Beyond the excellence of the writing - and excellent it is - is the appreciation of the art that inspired your art. That you can garner so much emotion and expound so eloquently on a frozen moment held together by brushstrokes and pigments, breathing life into it beyond the capacity of the original work... that, young lady, is the stuff that dreams are made of :~) At least, mine are.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 8, 2008
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 6, 2008
Truly you are inspired and we are blessed that you share this inspiration via your verses, Michelle. Thank you for this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 6, 2008
FABOULOUS, Michelle... So Romantic and Renaissance. Superb ethereal feel and love the stanza:

and i swam with you
because you swim
the same lengths as me,
stroking.

... such a unique and sensuous, sinuous union in unison. Totally love it, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 5, 2008
The depths of devotion and love is shining in this poem..I love the painting, but like Andy said, your poem is by far better!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
...wonderful pen here Michelle...your words of a deep love...find the light of the waters surface...shining in the depths of your poetry.
excellent...
John

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
An orignal, creative interpretation. However, the painting should be an interpretation of your poem. For I like far better, your write, than the oil. Keep the good stuff coming our way. Thanks, Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
To the depths and surfacing on exquisite! Excellent pen!
So enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
Terrific idea, my only question is: wouldn't it be better in all present tense? (not a big deal though) I like the whole idea: "... diving is divine..." Most unusual love poetry I've read in awhile. AND you'd like my jazz song off my new CD being released this week (CreateSpace.com) "The DeepAbyss" ("I too shall swim")
Nice to know of you...michael guy

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2008
and i go down with you
because with you is
peace and sin,
submission <---- divine way to drown.

Never thought of dove as in diving.
The poem is better than the painting, yet i can nee explain as to why...

Reviewed on April 4, 2008
Simply beautiful, to let go and love like this is truly a gift


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