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Dancing In The Dark
by Jenni Kalicharan → (All Poetry by Jenni Kalicharan)
  
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Snuck into your party, feeling full of gloom.


Looked for and found you, in a little deserted room.


You were so very surprised, or should I say, in shock!


You told me this wasn’t smart and we can’t turn back the clock.


 


But here we are together, dancing in the dark


The glow in my eyes providing the only spark..


Forgetting all around us, as I hold you so tight.


Knowing this is wrong, makes it all seem so right.


 


Looking all around me, stealing a sweet kiss,


You know fully well,  those sexy lips I miss.


Your hands start roaming all across my back,


Sending shivers down my spine, through my top of black.


 


You pull me towards you, closer to your chest,


And I feel you shiver as your skin touches my breasts.


I feel your warm breath as it caresses my face,


While your fingers slowly undo my bra of lace.


 


Our bodies still moving in unison, swaying to the beat,


“Sweetheart,” I say to you, “We have to be discreet.”


You release me slowly and turn towards the door,


Locking it before returning and laying me on the floor.


 


Here you undress me slowly, eyes savoring my every curve,


Lips kissing me all over, touching my every nerve.


You bring me to such ecstasy while I control my need to scream,


Oh darling, my darling, if only this wasn’t a dream!!


 


 


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 Reviews of "Dancing In The Dark"
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on July 30, 2003
loved the ending, or should I say surprise ending, nice poem

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
love this. from the union of words to rhyming to story inside this poem.

very good.

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
I would need a lot of Tide if I had dreams like that. (wink) or lots of sheets

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
Awesome Awesome Awesome, now your talking my language Jenni! ;O) teehee
This was such a AWESOME PIECE all the way around!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
Dreams! what would we do without them;-)!Excellent write Jenni!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
Quickened my pulse rate I can tell you that.

Reviewed on July 29, 2003
good dream you had, jenni! love this soft, sensual write! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in america, karen lynn.

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
lovely and compelling.
jenni, you never cease to
amaze and delight me!

john+

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
Those dreams get us excited for sure!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on July 29, 2003
A wonderful dream Jenni. A beautiful, flowing poem
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
Well, it is a dem good dream. Well done. Love the rhythm of this one.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
Oh those dreams get us excited all the time?
Enjoyed Jenni.......your friend........Ron

Reviewed on July 28, 2003
This was excellent, softly sensual..too bad it was a dream!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
Wow. a dream...what a bummer. As I was reading, I kept thinking, dont get caught, dont get caught!

so vivid! great work Jenni

Reviewed on July 28, 2003
This poem, "Dancing In The Dark" was poemized to flow under the beats of the heart to depict the face of sensuality, and poetized under the sounds of the drums of the libido, painting the lovers "Dancing In The Dark".

While reading this poem, "Dancing In The Dark", motion could be felt in every word. I had an impression that I was in a movie session. The actions aimed their striking light point from the first stanza – and on to a classic and sophisticated closing.

I would classify this poem, "Dancing In The Dark", – a true painting of Lovers Live on Canvas – and or, “Live Performance of true Art on the Stage.”

I thank the inspired Author of "Dancing In The Dark" for posting and sharing this masterpiece.

Never rest Your pen; don’t let Your quills dry.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
Going to have my dream after reading this.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
I hate waking up from a good dream. I try so go back to sleep real quick to see if I can pick up where I left off! : ) Great write Jenni!!

Jack

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2003
There are some dreams you just don't want to wake up from :-) Fantastic write.

Reviewed on July 28, 2003
Oh those sensual dreams!!!!!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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