MS. Black Widow, to You Eds (poem) by Kathy Armijo on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 8, 2008

you little devil you!!

well done!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Regards that picture, one night with you and i may change my "preferences", LOL, Ed

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

"That's all there'd be". Whew! Intense. Great stuff. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

...she cackled, venomously...

She clung to a web
made of black-spun cords
in that corner of darkness,
in the cave of horrors.

And though she motioned
delicately,
with her eight arms waving
seductively,

No Ed advanced up
those sticky rungs
that spun in the circles,
from which she clung...

But down on the floor,
are some powdery shreads--
the remains of the lovers
she last devour-Ed

--Charlie

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Three Eds are dead! I said that a long time ago! Suck um' dry, Kathy! LOL!
The Little Jimmy in the corner no longer dines on cheese! I'm watching you!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

What a cute and sweet poem. Sounds like you have lots of charm my friend...love, Bonnie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Go get em Ms. Dangerous!!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Sounds like they are in for a "Venomous Delight"
too cute Kathy!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Wow! You must be that very naughty cousin we keep hearing about!!

We'll send the Jersey Devil Ed, right over! Looks like Long Georg agrees!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Hmmmnnnn Kathy you little naughty vixen you, and here all this time we thought you were the fairie virgin type. Ahhhh where was that cave?
Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 6, 2008

Kathy,

I know all God's creatures serve a purpose but did it have to be a spider? Brrrrrrrrr! I got chills. (lol)Good one.

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

...great write Kathy... and the picture...well...I like the widow's walk.
John

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

Black Widows are not match for a Spiderfoot and a Long Georg, as you are bussy with a Jersey Devil the brothers will cut your silly laugh but gooooooooooooood!!!

ol'arachnid

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

fiesty, adjective, Kathy Armijo's picture. Score one for the women!

be well and happy,
Kathy

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

Kool Write Kathy
Don't see any of those chickens taking the bait
Peace & love be with you

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

Gotta love it! your sense of humor is delightful!;-)

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

Cute write Kathy!! :-D

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

so clever--way to go!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

Adorable write, Kathy; fun read! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 5, 2008

LOL Don't you dare bite the Eds - how are we going to read about their shenanigans? And your wonderful "spin" on things? Well done, Kathy!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.