WoMan in the Mirror (My Fifth Haiku) (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on May 6, 2008

Bernice
Yes passing blame onto others is not the reasons
Great Little Gem you Penned & Packed a punch of truth!!
Love & Hugs
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

And without that responsibility aspect... Oh... I just have to shake my head! Sadly there are many in this world who don't to go on a quest of self-discovery because they want to blame the world for their problems.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 5, 2008

Hey! hey! hey! what about all of we that look into self-discovery but have a bad responsability neighbor?

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Excellent observation!

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Responsibility can be a gracious neighbor, when she teams up with Service. And boy-howdy, does Self-discovery come out of her shell whenever she's around.

Great Haiku-- things to ponder. --Charlie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

so true. Wise words. Liz

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Great message. Love your haiku

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Excellent write Bernice and wonderful message.
Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Roe

Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Whoa! Man! Hard to fit those big words into a little haiku. By the way, here's another word for you--senryu. :)

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

love your haiku message here my lovely friend, I just wrote a poem called "personal pan poet." Finally figured what I was but I'm reaching for the stars, almost finished my second book, hugs

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

...to shake hands with ones reflection...on all sidewalks...is to hold the self close.
excellent Ku Bernice...
John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

The more KU u DO, the better u will get, so TRUE...ed

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Bernice,

This is beautiful in its simplicity - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Another wise observation offered as a lovely Ku for us to ponder. well done Bernice.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

Great write, Bee; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

You are making your Ku's a work of art
with a wisdom message! Excellent, Bernice!

ET