Opportunity (Senryu) (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

Good Morning Bernice
& Great Pic Beautiful :)
I Love Your Poetic Lil'Gem You Have Here!
You're Very Good At These!!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 14, 2008

Yes I know
Iam still waiting for it
to knock on my door....lol
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 13, 2008

Amen to that, reminds me so much of the best friend, the soul sister I lost last Feb and the friend I lost just a couple of weeks ago, I am looking forward to that great reunion in the sky.
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 13, 2008

Excellant form and message and I love the picture of you with your friend...you both look so naturally happy.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Quanda Graves

Reviewed on June 12, 2008

Simple, sweet, nice and inviting.

Until...

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on June 12, 2008

I like it.Opportunity can be our best friend and we shouldn't take it for granted.Opportunities are everywhere and we should let it in our lives.

Edwin

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 12, 2008

Simple words that carry such truth and meaning. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 12, 2008

It certainly can be construed in such a way. Well done!
Richard

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 12, 2008

Bernice, I love this!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 12, 2008

Dear Berni...one can use a million words to describe opportunity, you just did it with so few that...thousand words seem superfluous.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

You know what they say, when opportunity knocks, open the door every time and be greeted with smiles....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

True words spoken succinctly - beautifully!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

My favorite aunts motto was, "trust no living azz and tip lightly among the dead." That's good advice for you Bernice. Ugly might try to kill you, beauty might try to kill you, if I was a mirror, well anyway great 5-7-5 on friendship, lovely picture, koob pasa, :-)

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Your senryu packs a powerful punch of truth!
Cryssa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Wild. So simple and so true. Wonderful write. Liz

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Very interesting and true! I like the way you presented this, with the provocative question. I will keep this in mind. :-)

Axilea

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Bernice, you're so right, this speaks volume's and I just thought it was great!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

well done, bernice!
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Of course, you should never miss an opportunity like that!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

How true is this,, to reach out to one is an awesome feeling.. on both ends. great photo too
Christine

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Fabulous! So neat and DEFINITELY true! Perish not, O Poet! You are quality assured and a master of your craft! More concise nuggets, please! So much you give us in so few words. Potential galore! :)) Kate xx

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

beautiful thoughts Bernice...all the friendships to behold.
John

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Oh Bernice, that is exactly how i feel when i am in Greenville :-)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Wonderful writing, Bernice; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

What would we do without friends and mentors! Beautiful, Bernice -

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.