To Jesus, With Love (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on August 13, 2009

Maybe the opening thought... "On earth, with man, my heart is vulnerable but with you oh God it is simply invaluable." And another one: "your love is as constant as the moon's light at dark; I only have to turn to you and I'm at peace again" maybe switch words around a tiny bit for poetry's sake "have only" instead of "only have?" It's up to you. And another: "Loving you has been the best gift I ever offered myself"...again, you can poke it around to fit better, but I think it'd be perfect for one with a wise man on the front. Beautiful thoughts. Truly beautiful. --Charlie

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

One can tell, this was written from the heart, (hugs) Holly

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 1, 2009

no He will never desert you. Great support system. Beautiful poem. Liz

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 31, 2009

He is a supreme constant in our lives....M

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 30, 2009

This reads like a prayerful psalm and stands as another testimonial to your faith, Bernice. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on April 14, 2009

Yes he is the only one who will never hurt or desert you. Gorgeous poem Bernice.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on April 5, 2009

Nothing is more comforting and more cherished than the gift of love...your thoughts will inspire and touch the very soul of those who read this poem...

a very inspiring write...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Lovely prayer to Jesus,
ann

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Magnificen tribute to Creator! Splendid sentiments in this poem Bernice!Kudo's...ET

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 3, 2009

Simply beautiful!

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

"For His grace is sufficient for me." Your poem so declares His love, very well written.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Bernice, I'm not much of a praying man but
I can appreciate a beautiful prayer...and a
beautiful poet. -gene.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

great faithful verse Bernice, hope you're doing fine, enjoying the Lords bright sunshine, cheers

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Beautifully said my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Although I am agnostic, I love the simple beauty of this write, like a prayer you speak to your God with love and openess...very nicely done.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

An excellent tribute to God's boundless love for us. R

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Beautiful writing, Bernice; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Beautifully said, Bernice...I especially loved the line "the yeast that makes the dough rise." It really struck me that He makes all good things grow and that His spirit helps our hearts to grow in love as well...and, and, and...

Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Bernice...if only everyone would "gift" him or herself with HIM! Very nice writing, with a wonderful message.. thank you, lindalaw

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 2, 2009

Bernice,

This is absolutely beautiful. Few take the time to thank the Son for His many gifts - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.