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breathing deeply
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
  
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slow and soft... fingers gently touch
a subtle moan escapes my lips as i
feel the tone of sound

now building chords with both hands
the sound is high and tinkles
my eyelids feel like they've been kissed
and my body starts to shiver

adding bass and harmony
the notes are played much stronger
and now my heart is beating on
and my legs begin to quiver

faster harder is the rhythm
the composer pumps and sways
my body rocks and knows the essence
...of this evening play

letting go in full climax
that leaves me sitting in my chair
in pulsing waves of afterglow
enjoying/swirling every note..
.. the overture
...........of this piano

....breathing deeply....

debby


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 Reviews of "breathing deeply"
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on December 8, 2004
Takes you to the crescendo of pleasure....Debby
Again highly original and inventive....you have a very fertile and responsive mind and soul....
Peter

Reviewed by angel michael (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
I wanna be reincarnated as your music teacher...

~~michael~~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
Now I know what has been missing. I have got to get myself a piano! :-)))

Excellent write.

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
The way to a ladies heart is through her ear! How wonderfull! Giving out your secrets?
Love this poem and what it did for me! Lovely write I wish I could have wrote it!
Cheers
Allain

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2002
wonderful!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 1, 2002
the symphony breathes...

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2002
Music is definately an intricate part of our souls. Nothing can quiet touch us the way music does.. Loved this!
Love and Light
dreamweaver


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