allocate (poem) by Debby Rosenberg on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2010

I so love this. And, I love the painting - it makes me want to get out my oils.

Reviewed on July 4, 2010

"After all".....................Your beautiful realization of this insightful piece is what I came here for.......:) and you delivered it so well!

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on May 28, 2010

Deeply wise and superblu written.

Needed this!!

xOx Phyllis xOx

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on May 26, 2010

Debby, you write with such peace and wisdom.....and the painting compliments the piece perfectly....I'm so happy to have found youhere on AD.

Reviewed by Tony Jenkins

Reviewed on May 12, 2010

"a peaceful calm noticed and experienced
projecting a new earthly reality, afterall wasn�t that
the experience we all came here for?"

Yes Please.

Tony

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on May 2, 2010

Let's hope the "shifts are in progress" -more people like you and I know we would attain "rightness". This line caught my feelings:
"watching the migrating birds arrive to drink, feed, and rest" It just seems yesterday I refreshed myself watching them come through this dismal "hot box" now they are gone, home to you and other northerners. THEY (the birds) have the right idea; I wish I could follow them...
(sorry I haven't kept up with your great poems, I'll try to get back)
Mike

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 2, 2010

You express much meaningful substance that provokes thought via your verses here, Debby. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on May 2, 2010

I find this intriguing, especially that Stanza #5, but the whole is very satisfying. Be Always Well, Carin'

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 2, 2010

A lovely and thought-provoking write. I love the painting, too.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on May 2, 2010

This, for me, has been a peaceful reflection...Both the words and the picture blend well.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 2, 2010

I found this verse particullary poignant-i enjoed the write!:
no longer holding the manipulated inappropriate

stories of victims and dramas, those currents are interrupted

and replaced with sensations of understanding the game

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 2, 2010

Sitting in the eye of the storm and knowing what's coming, bracing ourselves, already having sorrows for the onslaught's aftermath...

Georg

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 1, 2010

Oh yes, wisdom abound in this write, Debby, I agree with what you have said...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Carol Wager (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2010

soft and serene