Deus Ex Machina (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Robby Baby Poet of Amour (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Cool...I remember using that term in one of my favorite poems "Purple Dawn. I feel like this poem almost reaches a spiritual intensity, but there is just something there that needs to be added; it feels spaced out to me just a bit. A good poem, but I'd have made it a bit longer

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 5, 2008

Exceptional write Vicky, love Holly

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

Overflowing with love, the essential core of everything that has meaning. Bravo! Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

Hi Vickie,

I think you have written a time immemorial piece, that should be in the Louvre, or the Smithsonian, next to all the other imporatant writings of our time.

I have been writing poetry since I was in the 5th grade, but you have written a piece that is for all generations. As Felix said, this piece is "Very intense and earthly magical..." Thank you for sharing, Vickie.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), den sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

Very intense and earthly magical write that expresses your forsight wonderfully Vick.
Fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

Such a beautiful poem, Vickie, I just love the imagery and the image...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

Tres, Tres jolie ma copine. J'adore tes mots sur papier....The editor drives me crazy sometimes too especially when you have to re-write everything after you've pasted from Word...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

We are all having editor issues, it is a piece of junk but you write some wonderful poetry on it!!

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

Oui, c'est tres bien.

Gauthier

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

I am a vessel of voyage...we all are , some with beautiful sails, others leaking here and there, but we all have in one form or another our own...ne ces quois...a Dues ex Machina?

Georg

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 3, 2008

eww this editor is really workin my nerves!! does anyone else have issues?