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Stolen Property
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The difference between stealing & thieves
You Stole My Heart... but then again... I watched you take it... Have you ever fell in love? Of course you have.... I sometimes fall into love (it is a long way down too...) I sometimes landslide into love (I scraped my a$$ all up) and sometimes I stumble into love... (my weak ankles) I have been caught in love too... (dayam sticky traps & treble hooks) manipulated by impersonators of lvoe (I spelt that wrong on purpose) deceived by decapitators of lvoe (ditto) but if there is a next time you know.... that one time I hear about “true love” well...it's all true actually isn't it? Even those lusting in love? It's true passion true desire Well anyway... if there is a next time for the big elle (L) I know what I will do... I won't fall or be blindsided or landslided or caught up in it none of that... I am going to keep my eyes wide open & then I am going to stick my foot out and trip someone... (Written: June 12^th, 2010 10:57 a/m) © Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 13, 2010

A sense of humor about dating. Dang. Hard to have in these days, I would imagine. So glad I'm married. A fun poem to read.
Sheila

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver

Geesh Vickie,
You sure tell it like it is. I know the feeling been there done that! But do not give up, I am sure you will find that perfect someone. " Chaque pain a son morceau de fromage" Every piece of bread has its' own piece of cheese. This is one of my favorite saying in French.
Nicole

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Oh VIckie, I am smiling..you are a classic~and a dear heart at that!
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Laughing my head off at this one although so much of it is true...I don't think as poets and romantics we have a whole lot of control over love...I think we are ruled by our hearts and our minds only kick in when we find out somehow the love we thought was real was just smoke and mirrors. That being said...when two romantics fall in love...then the angels themselves sing.
fee

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on June 12, 2010

Intriguing...

Love and Hearts,
Sage

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Ohhhhh Vickie there will be a next time, just step in with your eyes wide open, hold your heart in tack with a lock and key before you open it wide enough for anyone to get in before you are ready to let them in.
Fred tried to get into my heart after my divorce and it took him seven years. I refused to let anyone steal my heart again once I got it back and mended.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

i hope ther is a next time for you. you deserve all the love in the world.

Dave.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

am going to keep my eyes wide open
& then
I am going to stick my foot out and trip someone...

I appreciate your wry sense of humor here with this theme dear Vickie. I can relate to all that you have expressed via your verses. Thank you. Love, hugs, and best wishes,

xo Regis

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

This is hilarious!
I just love it, and hope we get to hear how the game plays out~
Blessings,
Christine