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Commanding You
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some fun bump and grinding adult trick-r-treat visuals...
Commanding You Darkling of vampiric hungers Your throat I’ll gingerly seek To crawl all over your body Licking your thong and cheek Don’t call it disgusting I know what you adore Man handled by a woman Begging with whips for more Stand before these three mirrors Watch the reflections of lust Tasting the pearls of passion Depths throat it is an absolute must Oh sorry for the intrusive invasion These thoughts get carried away While I take you with these wristlets Commanding you come what may… © Poetess Victoria L. McColley DARK POTRY OCTOBER 2010

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Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2010

wow ! that was something else that raises the temperature
depths throat it is an absulute must.
my mind is racing you are a very erotic writer, and i love evry wod you write.
Dave,

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 30, 2010

wowa..this is powerfully spell bound...love it~

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 30, 2010

Halloween dark and passion far from meek. You may continue to command me Vickie. A marvelous treat without any trick(?). Love and peace to you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 30, 2010

Like the sun glasses! Hmmm, now we are getting into the holiday spirit...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on October 30, 2010

Wow, I am speechless..it is so erotic it makes me want to commandeer someone...

Great work, as always, poetess

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 30, 2010

...and so begins all Hallowed Eve
fee

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on October 30, 2010

...hmmm

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Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on October 30, 2010

WOW!!! Forget Halloween! Bring it on. Seriously though Vicky, This is really well done.... Like it a lot. It's almost as nice as the book covers you've designed for us. Dick

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