AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Robert Liu, iDavid Arthur Walters, i RickthePoetWarrior, iChristine Boyce, iRobin Ouzman Hislop, iSusan Smith, iGlenda Bixler, iEva Pasco, iKalikiano Kalei, iMatt Miller, i

  Home > Sociology > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Marilyn Seray

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 248 Titles
· 3,990 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

Marilyn Seray, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen!



Oh Please, Cut It Out!
by Marilyn Seray → (All Poetry by Marilyn Seray)
  
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

Why do you always whine?
It’s such a waste of time
No matter what you say
Comes out like donkey bray

Sympathy and pouty acts
Might throw people off the track
But all those whiny crocodile tears
Is just distortion to the ears.

Throwing tantrums and screechy fits
To get attention is just the pits
Deal with life and have some tact
Cause someone just might whine right back

© All rights reserved MS 2002


Poem Artwork


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Oh Please, Cut It Out!"
Reviewed by The Gentle Man
Reviewed on May 24, 2003
I don't think there's anything more annoying than a whiner....you said it well Marilyn!

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
well said! reminds me of my little sister... and my 25 yr old cousin! :)

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Wonderful write and wonderful pic ... !!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Love this one its sooooo cute! Great write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
You go Girl, wooo hooo!!!

Reviewed by Cles Wilson
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Oh Did I love this!

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Marylin,
Gotcha on the piece AND this picture just
captivates me in a whole different place.
My brother has this most precious dragon picture of Mama flying with her baby. I see the baby as "believing" it is lost here. Hope you don't mind if I write it. Vicky

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
My wife is the Queen of whine, please don't tell her..hee, hee.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
ahahahahaha, love it! ;)

Love, Janet xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
I enjoyed this--the picture is cute, too...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
A whinning...000ps winning duo... Marilyn...loved both;-)!

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Wonderful write.. love the art...

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
Did Mundo put you up to this? <wink> LOL I don't think I'm a whiner but I somehow can relate to this write! lol Thanks for the write and the chat... I had a blast as always hun... take care.... ((((honihoni))))

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2002
I'm sorry for so much whining! No more I promise. Yes, this just has to be me, but do I really whine all the time. Hugs Bill

Reviewed on August 26, 2002
as my boss says, "you want some CHEESE to go with that WHINE??" :) that's me all over...but sometimes, i just got to have a little whine! :) this is adorable...thanks for the advice...but i'm gonna keep on whinin' when i gotta whine...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed on August 26, 2002
cute, but is this directed at ME?? i was doing a great deal of whining just a bit ago....LOL


New Poetry by Marilyn Seray
Popular Poetry (Sociology)
  1.  BLACK HISTORY(acrostic)
  2.  VIOLENCE ?
  3.  CRY WITH ME...BUT FOR A WHILE
  4.  Why I Am This Person
  5.  What's It About?
  6.  Herd Mentality...
  7.  obligations
  8.  For Such a Time as This
  9.  Convergence
  10.  Suburbia
  11.  The Portal
  12.  ONCE UPON A TIME ...
  13.  On This Memorial Day
  14.  Aliveness and Living
  15.  Loyalty
  16.  The Walking Live
  17.  Stare Us In The Face
  18.  Big Frog, Little Frog
  19.  Hope Springs
  20.  Marco Polo
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Earth-centric Humanity at the Crossroads by Martin Treon

For the reasons I describe in this book, the world-wide suffering, death and extinction of humanity is very likely to occur, unless nonviolent and democratically determined radical and revolutionary personal and societal actions and changes are taken  
Member BookAds

Sterrorilization by RickthePoetWarrior

Black white (well sort of pinkish) etcetera, Christian Muslim etcetera, Hetero-Homo-Metro Sexual, Physical, Mental, Ow! Includes all human rights violations I could think of.  
Member BookAds

The Angel of Luxury and Sadness, Volume 1 by Ian Irvine (Hobson)

A detailed study of the origins of the New Alienation. The author labels it normative or postmodern ennui and traces its rise to cultural power over the last two centuries.  
Member BookAds