The Thread (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

A wonderful write. Very deep and passionate.

Reviewed by me

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

powerful and deep-i only hope that this can all change and you receive some relief

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

a heartwrenching piece which I understand so well my friend
Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

As a person who loves God more than self, I have always hoped to live to see the day we could put rhetoric aside and realize most of us want the same things. We just have different ideas on how to achieve it. I hope we can have a peaceful place here at the Den for we are all here for the main purpose of writing poetry, and yes expressing ourselves and being read. It would be nice if we stopped the political baloney and put it in another forum on boards or something, and lets get back to enjoying each others poems. this comment will go on everyones post, so please don't feel singled out;-) Thank you, God bless your day, and make it a good one!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

Felt this to the bottom of my very deep soul, a reflection of yours.

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

From your soul Marilyn...a heartwrenching piece which I understand.
Chrissie x

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

Such an emotional write!!

Scada

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

good write

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

This is kinda sad but well woven together to make a terrific poem

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

I'm so glad that you gave yourself a chance, you are a beautiful soul.

Love to you, JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

this was so pretty and beautiful but with such dark stark sadness you did an excellent job on this but I worried why you not been here lately i like reading your poetry and have missed it alot okay i done complaining sorry about that

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

I am so saddened by this poem. It is a memoir of my last fifteen years. One day I woke up, my feet hit the floor, I'd realized I'd done everything I could to make it better but was the only one trying. I let thesunshine in and never looked back. Now...I couldn't begin to explain the love and harmony I see all around me all because I gave ME a chance again. This makes me cry but it also gives me a chance to reflect upon my own power. I hope others find the door open for them too. Love,peace and harmony,
Susan

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

Wonderful write Marilyn!
Jack

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

Beautiful loving write!

Ty
Tony:)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2003

You did not miss a stitch.