The haiku master of yesterday as well as those who really practice the craft speak of having a "haiku moment." I had a moment of something, haiku or not.
a haiku moment
birthed within my inner man
sweet simplicity
manifested sons
risen with the one before
overcoming all
silent temptation
great risk of reaching higher
victory within
new life springs within
visions higher dwelling place
hopes reality
Welcome back, Lori - and what a homecoming! A pure epiphany, by the look! I'm with Ed - I especially like the last ku, speaking as it does of the combination of vision and hope: the latter being birthed by the former. I would say that the thought in these three lines is complete. You must have been reading my thoughts as I was about to post you a message to ask how you were... now I know: inspired, as always! Thank you for this little gift. Love Kate xx
In "A Touch of Your Presence" are words that would inspire, encourage and strengthen one's soul when faced with challenges and difficulties and to know the awesomeness of God's power.
I think my days must be filled of haiku moments
only because I seem to be such a haiku-a-holic
Great Haiku!
Thanks for past reviews!
wonderful I especially love the last one..
floria
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Beautifully crafted Lori!
you maintain the sacti-sanctum of imagery in these ku meter so well...
Debashish