A Distant Melody (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on February 2, 2004

I can feel the despair in this write. Very well done.

Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

A dream; however, if it were to be reality, how painful the heart would sink into submission before death was captured.

Reviewed by Edmund Canto

Reviewed on June 13, 2002

Great creative writing of a DREAM.
Aloha, Mundo

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 11, 2002

Lori,
This speaks volumes:Her heart becomes her enemy
But why she doesnt know.

I feel your frustration here, on so many levels!!!! The depth of these lines is chilling! Incredible write!!!
Please visit my site if you ever have the time!!!!!! And if you ever want to talk, my ears and shoulders are always here!!!!!!

In light and love,
Hugs,
Maria
xoxoxo

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 9, 2002

That was quite a nightmare.

Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

These are real forso many....I hope that yours stay only as dreams.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

good poem... but what exactly is her nightly test that her lover is unaware about?

Reviewed by Sandy Forbes (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Well-written.

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

I'm glad it was just a dream too. Excellent, write.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Nice write!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

For some it's not a dream, great writing Lori...

Reviewed by Sean O'Connell (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Keep making those thoughts stay as dreams.You are too precious to turn them into reality

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

A condition of such misery is hard to write about and you did it beautifully...bravo!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Great writing--vividly expressed...

Reviewed by Michelle Carroll (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Perhaps it is a dream, but aren't dreams the minds reality? Great imagery.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

What a dream THAT was. Nicely written Lori.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

good for her it was just a dream.......
depression at it's best good write!!!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Your creative ability is truly magnified. The shadows of our past seem to manifest themselves in dreams and seep into our conscious thoughts.

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Hmmm... frighteningly real.

Scada

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

wonderful lori. personally my dreams are real, my life is vaporous and dreamlike

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Namaste Lori
I have so many friends who do SI.. my daughter included. This poem was chillingly real.
Love and Light;
dreamweaver

Reviewed by Donald Iarussi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

very sensitive,

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Her lover is there but is her love?
has it really died not ever to be replaced no matter who shares her bed.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 7, 2002

Hi Lori,
I'm with Peggy on this one....
Glad that you woke up
and saw some peace.
Well done...