If Only You Were Here (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

When we love, we presume so much...especially from a distance. Excellent, Lori.

Gina

Reviewed by Steve Reichard (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Wonderfully-written piece Lori thanks for the kind comments you gave to me on my work also.

Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

Deep, penetrating, and admirable.

Reviewed by Timothy Foley (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2002

Pained love is a wound that takes time to heal...this is a very heartfelt and genuine poem. Wonderful expressive write.

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Another well expressed piece. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2002

Love is strange isn't it? Good write.

Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2002

Hearbreaking-very well expressed.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 16, 2002

Excellent poem, Lori. Sometime I think we are more afraid of what we might lose once we have it, then actually having it. Great and true words.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 16, 2002

Love is a very splendoured thing!.....and is myterious as hell.

Thank you so much Lori, for all your wonderful comments to my poetry. Your comments means a lot and is very much appreciated. Thank you!

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on June 15, 2002

Honest, vulnerable, articulate. All that poetry should be.

Reviewed by Sanilnath

Reviewed on June 15, 2002

Hello,

Good and excellent thinking ... Nice to meet a good writer.

Visit : <a href='http://www.lindahill.cjb.net'>http://www.lindahill.cjb.net </a>

With Regards
Sanil

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2002

beautiful my dear friend,,Charlie

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2002

Exceptional as usual Lori.

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on June 15, 2002

When love is based on fear....very thought provoking.
Josie

Reviewed by Michelle Carroll (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2002

Beautiful Lori, Great work and truly heartfelt.

Reviewed by Tyrone Godfrey (Reader)

Reviewed on June 15, 2002

If only I were there Lori, If only.
Beautful poem.

Reviewed by Deborah Turner

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Wow! Strong emotions. I can feel your heart in this one.
Thank you so much for the great review of my poem. It's wonderful to meet other authors.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

love is sometimes based on the fear of getting it and then maintaining it... excellent poem...

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Awesome write Lori...Loved it !

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Painful to love and not be loved back.

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Lori, this is terrific. There are other shepherds...

Scada

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Sad,yet hopeful...the lambs all get eaten eventually by the shepards...good thing u got away..

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Lori, again such rich expressions and deep feelings...I agree with Amor in wondering if we don't sometimes assume a love form another that really doesn't have the depth we thought it did. Maybe we confuse our own and project it on to them for we so long for them to feel the same way we do....;-)

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Great writing--vividly expressed, powerful impact...

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

Hi Lori,
I had to read that twice before I understood it(I am not very bright)
Yes very good emotional projection.
Morchuis

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

"My unchecked thoughts would quiet-in the harbor of your crescent understanding"...it is odd how that love we feel and thought to be eternal and exclusively ours can possibly be transfered over to someone else" I have to wonder whether we interpreted that kind of love correctly or not. Beautiful write as always Lori
Amor

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 14, 2002

This was Excellent Lori, so much emotion, and yearning