Empty (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Amber Lynn (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Wonderful poem, although it is sad so many of us can relate. Keep on...

Reviewed by Trinette Cooper

Reviewed on August 6, 2002

This has been my life for the past year. So beautiful & sad...

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

this could so easily have "wallowed".. instead it soars with real agony and a tear- stained beauty.. great write. katy.

Reviewed by S M (Reader)

Reviewed on July 13, 2002

Lori this is so sad. It made me cry.

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on July 13, 2002

have you been reading my mind? very good!

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on July 13, 2002

Fabulous write. Enjoyed it.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on July 11, 2002

A great poem, Lori.
I must confess I loved Romantic Scorpios response to this poem.
Good write, hon. :)

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on July 11, 2002

This was so powerfully written ...a tug at the heart...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2002

Powerfully written--deeply moving...

Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2002

Remember, the last time an Angel left heaven, he was condemned. The loss is not your's!

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Reviewed on July 6, 2002

Lori, very deeply felt, but a good poem you presented here
Aloha, Mundo

Reviewed by Energy Shifter (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

But life continues

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

Very creative write indeed!!!!! Lori, this was sad, but very creative!!!!!

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

I agree with Jeanette Foresta.......about bouncing back. Thanks for reading and rating my work Lori.

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

Unique and touching. Life does have it's ups and downs and up is just around the corner. Best wishes,
J.

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

so sad, so full of feeling.

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

Lori,your words of sadness expose all the beauty that you have stored within my friend,,Blessings to you always,Charlie

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

Hi Lori,
Felt every word,very sad.
Morchius

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

We are what we feel...we are the reason we love so well. The roots of emotion grow deep and when it blossoms..love can never die
Amor

Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

I hate to give advice because I know it is how you do your writing/therapy, me too. Butt,) I can't help myself...:} You will bounce back. Just think of the bad times, not the good. It works! You are resiliant!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

This is a well written heart felt , tear jerking poem. Life does have its bad moments. But I have to disagree with Alexander. Life is not empty. Its beautiful! and you know I have seen the bad times.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

Hi Lori,

Thank you for the poem. It's raw, honest & gritty. Like life. Wishing you all the best.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

I agree with Ginger. The world is full of bastards and bad poetry about rainbows, puppies, and soft and fuzzy things. This tells it like it is. EMPTY. Like everyone else here at AD. :) Only they won't admit it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Rao Varanasi

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

great work lori. keep it up

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

very nice. like the structure. the e.m.p.t.y was great. great write. throw the words see whatcha get.

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

A very heartfelt emotional write. Great write, Lori...

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2002

We're sailing on the same boat eh? Excellent write hun...well all I tell myself is...people come and go..some touch you and well well...just keep moving. I tell you the same - Keep movin!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 4, 2002

Very creative and sensational write,,,though bittersweet...your style is impeccable...

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2002

So full of emotion hun.. And pain.. You've described it so well...

Love, Light and hugs
dreamweaver

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on July 4, 2002

Very touching wite, Lori. Jenni

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 4, 2002

heartfelt and so sad. Very emotonal. Great job Lori