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My Small Token (A Morning in Costa Rica)
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
  
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The sun ripened man moved slowly down the rustic street
meeting the morning as he did each day
His head already protected from the coming rays
by an old torn hat that had seen better days...
I had watched him all week
pushing his cart of fruit and sweets
selling along the street and in the square
and to him this must have been
just another day hoping to make ends meet...

The small bell on his cart announced his nearing
His dark eyes appeared empty, lifeless, and old
he seemed to not notice me standing there waiting
though I held my position, determined and bold...

As I eagerly stood in front of my hotel
he almost passed me by
so I called out to him revealing my desire
to examine his goods
hoping to purchase some fresh fruit
to start my day...


"Si señorita, my fruit is fresh," he said, "the best around."
It seemed the flies agreed with his observation...
“No, not that one,” he volunteered, displeased with my choice
“Theses are more ripe,” came his knowing voice
“And the mangoes are exceptional today,
no charge for the lady,” he went on
and before I could answer, he had handed me one.

Cuánto yo le debe, pedí
Doscientos cincuenta Colones, él dijo
which is about eighty cents.
I gave him my bill, ten dollars American and smiled
"The change is yours," I said, adding, "thank you for the mango."

With my choices made and his made for me
our transaction was now complete
He pushed his cart, ringing the bell
on his journey down the street...
Looking back to me
his eyes lit up with a smile
Tenga un día hermoso…... él dijo
Usted tiene un día hermoso también, señor...
My small token had brightened his day
making my breakfast all the more sweet...


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 Reviews of "My Small Token (A Morning in Costa Rica)"
Reviewed by John Hutchinson
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Bless your humanity...

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
this was a wonderfully written piece. felt i was there the entire time, could almost taste the mangos.
well done
josie

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Vivid story--and beautifully written...

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
wonderful write!!!!
hugs,
Chris

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
wonderful story/poem
enjoyed it much.......

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
well written. well said. well read. i too enjoyed the blending of the languages. the rhyme & rythmn were exceptional..thank you for sharing that moment. it made me smile.

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
well done that Man for inspiring such a great write, a realy nice well put together tale of kindness and appreciation that dosent stop there...we get to appreciate your work...take care...Mark ...

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Excellent write Lori..

Reviewed by Sailor Neptune (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
beautiful jewel.. excellent write.

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
hated to see it end.....

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Excellent poem, Lori. Probably one of your best. Great description.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Hey Lori... I love this one of yours. Funny how the little thingsin life often are the things that mean the most.

Love
Melanie

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Oh Lori,
I love this! I love the blend you have going on here! It even has a little Zennish feel to it! Very Cool! I like it a lot!!!
Me thinks I shall light some incense now! <wink> You put me in the mood!

Big Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
ilove the blending of langague here and the writting is warm lesson on how easy it is to make someones day while making your own.
Giving is the greatest thing we have.
Great write

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Quite wonderful how your writing has progressed to one of a totally different nature, Lori. You are a people watcher now and your world has opened up even wider. I should have asked you to wave out of the plane window to my family down in EL Salvador on your way to Costa Rica. Me encanta tanto lo que ha escrito aqui...es maravilloso y un testamento de tu espiritu.
Gracias por compartiendo algo tan riquesa.
Amor

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Wonderful story you got here - hope you're havin fun ;)

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Really beautiful account.... mangoes make my day also.lol
Jenni

Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
What a good simple story and you turned his normal day into one he will never forget. Must have been a great trip. J.


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