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Winter In New Haven
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Winter
in New Haven
brings snowy midnight dreams
which yield to mornings blanketed
with transparent crystal-like angel tears
drip dropping into shallow pools.
Victims of a new day
rising above
Winter


From a poetry challenge: The 1st and last line must be the same words. And it must be 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2 syllables.


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 Reviews of "Winter In New Haven"
Reviewed by Robin Spicer
Reviewed on May 28, 2004
Very good. I find this work most imaginative, to the point where i see the images you present to me.
Robin

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on May 19, 2004
Lori, this is soooo cool! love the imagery

Reviewed on May 19, 2004
you nailed it Lori, grade A, l&p. g

Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen
Reviewed on May 18, 2004
You rose beautifully to the challenge. I hope you will post more like this.

Reviewed on May 18, 2004
Thanks for sharing this charming and well-written piece!

Reviewed on October 15, 2002
I'm really enjoying your poetry -- especially the challenge of writing based on a specific form. Great.
Tiffany

Reviewed by Carrie Bolyard (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2002
Absolutely fantastic! I lived in Connecticut for a few years, and you have embraced the season very well!

Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on September 16, 2002
ive spent winters in/around new haven and its just like this...

Reviewed by N. P. (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2002
I adore this one!!!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2002
Challenges are fun and I am glad you took this one on. Good write.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
Nice dreamy quality...reflective. Good work! ~E

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
Great work...challenge well met..
Jenni

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
I like...

Reviewed by Gilles
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
Very well done...!
Blue eyed fish...

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
this is creative.....and I agree with Masarat
~~~smile~~~~

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
I love the way you did this...lovely images

Reviewed on August 31, 2002
Great answer to the challenge Lori.A good example of how less is more. Brings new snowy midnight dreams. Loved this line. This therapy bodes well with you. Tim

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
so cool

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
Beautiful poem, Lori. It will make my winters much brighter here. Love, Alex

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2002
another excellent write hun.. I love challenges. May have to try this one.. hmm when I am awake.. <smile>

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2002
Eeeks, sounds complicated but you did it well. I dare not count the syllables coz I'm widely known to suck at syllable-counting :)


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