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When Moments Count
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The first two go together. The final two are random.
silk flowers a lifeless substitute- his proposal lipstick on the wineglass- final kiss --- comforting my daughter mother’s words in my mouth when moments count poets need not bother- haiku

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Reviews of "When Moments Count"

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

Well written haiku...I'm still practicing!...M

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 1, 2009

A WRITE THAT GIVES THE READER GLIMPSES OF ONES FEELINGS...AT DIFFERENT MOMENTS IN THEIR LIVES - DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 31, 2009

good one Lori, I'd say a final kiss is fitting, before the final quitting, cheers ;-)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

each one well written ...

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

Silk flowers? Cheap bastard! You're right to give him the boot. Keep the wine though!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

Perfect, Lori. I particularly like the lipstick haiku. -gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

Intense and brings back a few painful memories that your ku's both the first two and the last could be appleied to in my own life.

Fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

Enjoyed

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 30, 2009

All of them quite powerful, Lori.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Beautifully said, Lori.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Romantic You....

TRASK

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Enjoyed all four well done indeed sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Lori,
Again, your touch is deft and sure, perfect for the genre, and I like all four. Yes!

John

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

I so enjoy your haiku, they always have substance with cause to ponder...ET

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

The first one is my favorite as it says so much in its inference

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

I can't decide if I like the first or second one the best, but why choose when I can save all four to my library and decide later. Wonderful words.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Cleverly done, Lori...with some igniting thoughts in the first two; tender in the third; SO RIGHT in the last :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke

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