Three Japanese Poems (Tanka, Senyru, Sijo) (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on September 20, 2002

Thank you Lori, for sharing these here. As I said earlier it is always interesting to me to learn about other styles of writing. (smile) Now I am gonna have to do some more exploring on these. These three were exceptional, you never cease to amaze me with your talents here.

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)

Reviewed on September 9, 2002

Oh Look out its godzilla!!!!
Oh sorry wrong japanese.
I don't know what the styles are suppose to like but you have intrigued me enough to find out.
thanks

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2002

I am hardly an expert at Japanese poetry, but these were lovely. **Mari**

Reviewed by N. P. (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2002

I love Horses, but all three are excellent!!

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on September 7, 2002

Lori, a great variation. Great write.
J.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on September 7, 2002

these poems were very well executed ;)

Reviewed by R Kimberley (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2002

"dancing in the morning dew
kissing the shy frozen earth"

This was truly beautiful. Excellent.

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

"kissing the shy frozen earth." Yes! Beautiful images. Picturesque & well written. Good job!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

9-06-02

How Well I Remember Dancing The Night Away . West View Danceland,i.e. Like The Leaves Fall ItBToo Fades Aawy...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

Lori, you excel at everything...these are all beautifully done. Loved the Tanka...and your footnote;-)

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

Very Good!! ~ clapping hands in appreciation~ Great job, Lori. ;) Silver

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

very good, but you forgot my favorite style - buni

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

Lori, you achieved this well. Your talent shines through. Wonderful, fantastic write!!!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

Awesome Lori. and LOL to your comment

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

I liked all three, Lori. I loved the one about horses. It's the Year of the Horse, and I fell in love with horses in Kentucky. They are truly majestic. Nuclear love reminded me too much of the very first haiku that I wrote in 1986:

Hiroshima Haiku

Blinding light
burning my people--
death everywhere...
July 6, 1986

I think you've done a great job. Love, Alex

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

Beautiful Lori...well done indeed.

Reviewed by Timothy writerwanted@hotmail.com

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

All three were great, but I loved number two best! Tim

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on September 6, 2002

Very good!